Re:Sentences

Changed Points : Thirteenth Iteration

2024/8/16　Lines 1-2 of the first paragraph

Sara dreamed of fulfilling her aspirations in the future. So she had to identify the challenges she currently faces and also come up with a plan to overcome them.

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Sara had been regretting her past of hitting the wall and running away. However, she strongly felt that she wanted to change herself from now on.

2024/8/16　Lines 2-4 of the first paragraph

For that reason, she wanted to do things like training to strengthen her mind and body. She had sufficient determination to push forward towards the future.

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She was already prepared in her heart. All she needed were action and the courage to push forward into the future.

2024/8/16　Lines 6-8 of the second paragraph

She needed to discern what she should do in order for her dreams to come true. Therefore, she had experienced various things so far in order to find clues for that purpose.

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And when she took that first step, something changed within her. Realizing it, she continued to sacrifice something at every opportunity and kept moving forward.

2024/8/16　Lines 8-9 of the second paragraph

However, despite her efforts, she couldn't get any closer to her dreams, and months turned into years.

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However, no matter how hard she tried, it didn't yield sufficient results.

2024/8/16　Line 9 of the second paragraph

She began to feel anxious due to her age.

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She reached her mental limit, feeling even irritated.

2024/8/16　Lines 9-10 of the second paragraph

To overcome this, she had to break down the values ​​she had formed for herself here and now.

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For that reason, she needed something to serve as a trigger to relieve stress.

2024/8/16　Line 12 of the third paragraph

So she wanted to try acting freely.

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So she sought advice from her friend.

2024/8/16　Lines 12-13 of the third paragraph

She decided to challenge herself to do things she wouldn't have done before.

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Thus, she was recommended to do something.

2024/8/16　Line 13 of the third paragraph

It was mountain climbing.

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It was mountain climbing, something she had never experienced before.

2024/8/16　Lines 13-15 of the third paragraph

And so, she deliberately chose the long way around. It appeared to be a waste of time, but that very waste was what she had been seeking.

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So she deliberately chose a distant foreign land. Though she could have settled nearby, she couldn't resist the allure of new encounters.

2024/8/17　Lines 17-19 of the fourth paragraph

And then, unfortunately, she witnessed the moment when a bird's chick was knocked out of its nest, causing her to stop in her tracks. It was as if she had been taught that in order to achieve her dreams, it was necessary to push others down.

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And unfortunately, at the very beginning, her spirit seemed to falter. But, giving up without even trying is not a good idea.

2024/8/17　Lines 18-19 of the fourth paragraph

And soon after regaining her composure, she stopped again for a different reason.

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However, that wasn't the only issue. Right after, she encountered another problem.

2024/8/17　Lines 21-22 of the fifth paragraph

The trunks of the trees were unnaturally twisted and tangled, obstructing the pathway.

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2024/8/17　Lines 21-22 of the fifth paragraph

She thought it was created by someone with malicious intent.

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