Re:Sentences

Changed Points : Thirteenth Iteration

2024/8/16　Lines 1-2 of the first paragraph

Sara dreamed of fulfilling her aspirations in the future. So she had to identify the challenges she currently faces and also come up with a plan to overcome them.

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Sara had been regretting her past of hitting the wall and running away. However, she strongly felt that she wanted to change herself from now on.

2024/8/16　Lines 2-4 of the first paragraph

For that reason, she wanted to do things like training to strengthen her mind and body. She had sufficient determination to push forward towards the future.

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She was already prepared in her heart. All she needed were action and the courage to push forward into the future.

2024/8/16　Lines 6-8 of the second paragraph

She needed to discern what she should do in order for her dreams to come true. Therefore, she had experienced various things so far in order to find clues for that purpose.

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And when she took that first step, something changed within her. Realizing it, she continued to sacrifice something at every opportunity and kept moving forward.

2024/8/16　Lines 8-9 of the second paragraph

However, despite her efforts, she couldn't get any closer to her dreams, and months turned into years.

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However, no matter how hard she tried, it didn't yield sufficient results.

2024/8/16　Line 9 of the second paragraph

She began to feel anxious due to her age.

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She reached her mental limit, feeling even irritated.

2024/8/16　Lines 9-10 of the second paragraph

To overcome this, she had to break down the values ​​she had formed for herself here and now.

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For that reason, she needed something to serve as a trigger to relieve stress.

2024/8/16　Line 12 of the third paragraph

So she wanted to try acting freely.

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So she sought advice from her friend.

2024/8/16　Lines 12-13 of the third paragraph

She decided to challenge herself to do things she wouldn't have done before.

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Thus, she was recommended to do something.

2024/8/16　Line 13 of the third paragraph

It was mountain climbing.

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It was mountain climbing, something she had never experienced before.

2024/8/16　Lines 13-15 of the third paragraph

And so, she deliberately chose the long way around. It appeared to be a waste of time, but that very waste was what she had been seeking.

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So, she deliberately chose a distant foreign land. Though she could have settled nearby, she couldn't resist the allure of new encounters.

2024/8/17　Lines 17-19 of the fourth paragraph

And then, unfortunately, she witnessed the moment when a bird's chick was knocked out of its nest, causing her to stop in her tracks. It was as if she had been taught that in order to achieve her dreams, it was necessary to push others down.

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And unfortunately, at the very beginning, her spirit seemed to falter. But, giving up without even trying is not a good idea.

2024/8/17　Lines 18-19 of the fourth paragraph

And soon after regaining her composure, she stopped again for a different reason.

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However, that wasn't the only issue. Because right after, she encountered another problem.

2024/8/17　Lines 21-22 of the fifth paragraph

The trunks of the trees were unnaturally twisted and tangled, obstructing the pathway. She thought it was created by someone with malicious intent.

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So much was happening that she had to stop in her tracks. For just a moment, she didn't understand what was happening.

2024/8/17　Lines 22-23 of the fifth paragraph

However, Sara decided to push past that point, executed it, and achieved remarkable success, letting out a cry of joy.

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Yet, subsequently, she devised a solution and carried it out, surmounting the obstacle. She was relieved by this and was able to take a breather.

2024/8/17　Line 24 of the fifth paragraph

But the sky was already dark.

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But around that time, it was also a fact that visibility had deteriorated due to the weather.

2024/8/17　Lines 25-26 of the fifth paragraph

Normally, it might have been the time when she herself would be sleeping.

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It might be better to take a rest, if truth be told.

2024/8/17　Lines 25-26 of the fifth paragraph

However, since she didn't feel very sleepy, she sat still with her eyes wide open for a long time.

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However, she continued to move around without doing so, fully aware of the drawbacks.

2024/8/17　Lines 26-27 of the fifth paragraph

Eventually, morning came.

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Then the sun emerged once again.

2024/8/17　Lines 29-31 of the sixth paragraph

As she stood up and walked forward, she met the gaze of a creature with an unfamiliar appearance. It had not only multiple eyes on its face but also on its torso, giving it an unusual characteristic.

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As she took a short break and sat down, she noticed something in the distance becoming aware of her presence and fleeing. It appeared humanoid in form, but its features were clearly not human.

2024/8/17　Lines 31-32 of the sixth paragraph

At first, she thought she had wandered into another world altogether.

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She wondered if she was imagining it.

2024/8/17　Lines 31-33 of the sixth paragraph

However, upon realizing the possibility that it might be a new species, she couldn't contain her excitement.

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But when she saw the same thing again, she regarded its presence as something real.

2024/8/17　Lines 32-34 of the sixth paragraph

With this, she felt she could bring her dreams closer. Yes, her dream was none other than to become a biologist.

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The desire to see and observe more closely drove her to take risky actions, unaware of the potential consequence of death.