Re:Sentences

Changed Points : Tenth Iteration

2024/8/13　Lines 1-2 of the first paragraph

Sara believed so much in the invisible, great power that she came to believe it was involved in every phenomenon she encountered.

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Sara believed herself to be a special existence and convinced herself that she was indirectly involved in everything happening in the world.

2024/8/13　Lines 2-3 of the first paragraph

And then, she became curious about its origins.

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Therefore, she wanted to know the true nature of the sensations slumbering within herself.

2024/8/13　Lines 3-4 of the first paragraph

However, the answer to that question isn't something that would be found by mere luck.

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However, it cannot be discerned without any action.

2024/8/13　Line 4 of the first paragraph

She decided to set clear goals and conduct research.

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She embarked on a journey of self-exploration, looking within herself.

2024/8/13　Lines 7-8 of the second paragraph

For her, conducting research was essentially an extension of her usual activities, and she felt no tension or anything of the sort.

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But, it was not her first time, so there were many parts she was already accustomed to.

2024/8/13　Line 8 of the second paragraph

Therefore, it started in the usual manner.

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Therefore, she was thinking of obtaining clues on the same day without delay.

2024/8/13　Line 9 of the second paragraph

However, things didn't proceed as expected, and she was facing some struggles.

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However, she realized that it was too ambitious a goal.

2024/8/13　Lines 9-10 of the second paragraph

Her inner thoughts gradually became dominated by a certain sentiment.

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Her sense of urgency intensified further, and her frustration knew no bounds.

2024/8/13　Lines 10-11 of the second paragraph

I wonder what on earth I'm doing here.

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Why is it that things never seem to go as planned at times like this?

2024/8/13　Line 13 of the third paragraph

She took a long time to sort through her thoughts in her mind.

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She set down all the belongings she had and organized them.

2024/8/13　Lines 13-14 of the third paragraph

She wanted to create a tool that would help with future endeavors as a result.

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Then she decided to choose tools to leave them there.

2024/8/13　Line 14 of the third paragraph

She spent some time on the task.

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She hesitated greatly but finally made a decision.

2024/8/13　Line 15 of the third paragraph

However, it's not good to become attached to anything specific.

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Then she left some items in that place and lightened her load a bit.

2024/8/13　Lines 15-16 of the third paragraph

In a sense, it was a thought born from Sara's profound understanding of the fragility of all things.

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In addition, there was another purpose: to use them as markers for the return journey.

2024/8/13　Lines 18-19 of the fourth paragraph

And then, perhaps due to fatigue, she lost her balance in a place where there was nothing.

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And due to her carelessness, she almost lost her balance, and her heart nearly stopped.

2024/8/14　Line 19 of the fourth paragraph

She felt a sudden wave of exhaustion coming on.

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She broke out in a cold sweat, and her breathing became rapid momentarily.

2024/8/14　Lines 20-21 of the fourth paragraph

After waiting a little while and then looking ahead, she felt even more fatigued due to something.

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Sara, having calmed her heart, revealed her sense of fear openly.

2024/8/14　Lines 22-23 of the fifth paragraph

It was because she found something like a pitfall. However, it also seemed like a phenomenon caused by a collapse.

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Large amounts of soil and numerous fallen trees blocked the path. However, there were many unnatural aspects that suggested it was not merely a natural occurrence.

2024/8/14　Lines 24 of the fifth paragraph

She had no idea about the cause or its details whatsoever.

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She didn't want to think any further about what was in front of her.

2024/8/14　Lines 24-25 of the fifth paragraph

She took a few steps back, then shifted her body in another direction and fled.

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Because of that, she avoided moving forward and instead fled sideways.

2024/8/14　Lines 25-27 of the fifth paragraph

Sara, running in a trance-like state, her breath heavy, noticed the moon hanging in the sky above and a bird overlooking her against its backdrop.

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With her arms swinging and her breath becoming increasingly labored, Sara paused to wipe the sweat from her forehead and looked up directly above her.

2024/8/14　Lines 27-28 of the fifth paragraph

The beautiful night sky was so reassuringly serene that it induced drowsiness in her.

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The cloudless night sky was so beautiful that it brought a sense of tranquility to her heart.

2024/8/14　Lines 30-32 of the sixth paragraph

However, the quiet night had turned into a noisy morning. When she tried to wake up, she noticed a sense of discomfort, and when she looked around, the scenery had completely changed.

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However, the lovely night came to an end, and morning arrived. As she tried to resume her journey, she sensed a herbivorous creature, seemingly accustomed to humans, approaching her. It was carrying something she believed she had left behind, strapped to its back.

2024/8/14　Lines 33-34 of the sixth paragraph

Therefore, she struggled to catch up with understanding, became confused, and it took time for her to blend into her surroundings.

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Therefore, she couldn't grasp the situation properly until some time had passed.

2024/8/14　Line 34 of the sixth paragraph

Nevertheless, she ended up learning a lot.

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And so, she spent a lot of time with the herbivorous animal and its owner who arrived later. While she strayed from her original purpose, for Sara, it was indeed a delightful experience.