Re:Sentences

Changed Points : Eleventh Iteration

2024/8/14　Lines 1-2 of the first paragraph

Sara believed herself to be a special existence and convinced herself that she was indirectly involved in everything happening in the world.

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Sara has always questioned her own purpose and hidden potential.

2024/8/14　Lines 1-2 of the first paragraph

Therefore, she wanted to know the true nature of the sensations slumbering within herself.

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Therefore, she strongly desired to truly understand the mission assigned to her.

2024/8/14　Lines 2-3 of the first paragraph

However, it cannot be discerned without any action.

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So, she believed that action was necessary.

2024/8/14　Lines 3-4 of the first paragraph

She embarked on a journey of self-exploration, looking within herself.

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She was prepared to sacrifice a great deal of time and effort.

2024/8/14　Lines 5-6 of the second paragraph

But, it was not her first time, so there were many parts she was already accustomed to.

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However, the time available to her was finite, and she couldn't use it infinitely.

2024/8/14　Line 6 of the second paragraph

Therefore, she was thinking of obtaining clues on the same day without delay.

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Therefore, her true desire was to obtain as many clues as possible.

2024/8/14　Lines 6-7 of the second paragraph

However, she realized that it was too ambitious a goal.

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However, with no progress made, only time continued to pass.

2024/8/14　Lines 7-8 of the second paragraph

Her sense of urgency intensified further, and her frustration knew no bounds.

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She felt a sense of crisis about not gaining anything.

2024/8/14　Line 8 of the second paragraph

Why is it that things never seem to go as planned at times like this?

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She reluctantly acknowledged her own misfortune, faced with results that could be considered unexpected, and contemplated what to do next.

2024/8/14　Lines 11-12 of the third paragraph

She set down all the belongings she had and organized them. Then she decided to choose tools to leave them there.

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She threw the burden she had been carrying onto the ground and stretched herself to change her mood.

2024/8/14　Line 12 of the third paragraph

She hesitated greatly but finally made a decision.

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She pondered over her thoughts and made changes to the plan.

2024/8/14　Line 13 of the third paragraph

Then she left some items in that place and lightened her load a bit.

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And then she gathered nearby stones and piled them up into a mountain-like shape.

2024/8/14　Lines 13-14 of the third paragraph

In addition, there was another purpose: to use them as markers for the return journey.

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It seemed meaningless at first, but for her, who had changed the plan, finding enjoyment along the way became a new purpose.

2024/8/14　Lines 17-18 of the fourth paragraph

And due to her carelessness, she almost lost her balance, and her heart nearly stopped.

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And as the muddy, old doll fell from above, she turned pale.

2024/8/14　Lines 17-18 of the fourth paragraph

She broke out in a cold sweat, and her breathing became rapid momentarily.

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When she looked up, feeling as though many dolls were staring at her, she couldn't take her eyes off them for a while.

2024/8/14　Line 19 of the fourth paragraph

Sara, having calmed her heart, revealed her sense of fear openly.

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She regained her composure only to have her heart rate accelerate once more in a different situation.

2024/8/14　Line 22 of the fifth paragraph

Large amounts of soil and numerous fallen trees blocked the path.

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Two giant trees intersected over the path in a way that seemed almost intentionally designed, as if they were meant to be joined together.

2024/8/14　Lines 23-24 of the fifth paragraph

However, there were many unnatural aspects that suggested it was not merely a natural occurrence.

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She couldn't believe it was a mere coincidence, something that had formed without human intervention.

2024/8/14　Lines 24-25 of the fifth paragraph

She didn't want to think any further about what was in front of her.

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She didn't want to dwell on it any longer, so she made a conscious effort to focus on the ground ahead of her.

2024/8/14　Line 26 of the fifth paragraph

Because of that, she avoided moving forward and instead fled sideways.

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While unconsciously seeking a familiar place, she suddenly realized it was already time to sleep.

2024/8/14　Lines 27-30 of the fifth paragraph

With her arms swinging and her breath becoming increasingly labored, Sara paused to wipe the sweat from her forehead and looked up directly above her. The cloudless night sky was so beautiful that it brought a sense of tranquility to her heart.

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Yet the night sky was so captivating that she forgot her drowsiness and wanted to keep staring at it.

2024/8/14　Lines 30-32 of the sixth paragraph

However, the lovely night came to an end, and morning arrived. As she tried to resume her journey, she sensed a herbivorous creature, seemingly accustomed to humans, approaching her.

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As she moved, timing her steps, she collided with something massive.

2024/8/14　Lines 30-31 of the sixth paragraph

It was carrying something she believed she had left behind, strapped to its back.

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It appeared to possess physical features resembling a combination of various animals.

2024/8/14　Lines 31-32 of the sixth paragraph

Therefore, she couldn't grasp the situation properly until some time had passed.

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At first, she thought her mind had gone mad for that.

2024/8/14　Lines 32-33 of the sixth paragraph

And so, she spent a lot of time with the herbivorous animal and its owner who arrived later.

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However, that thought was blown away by the appearance of the scientist who claimed to have created it.

2024/8/14　Lines 33-34 of the sixth paragraph

While she strayed from her original purpose, for Sara, it was indeed a delightful experience.

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The insights gained from those past events proved to be a great source of nourishment for Sara when she later accomplished her mission.