Re:Sentences

Changed Points : Third Iteration

2023/12/10　Lines 1-2 of the first paragraph

From Sariel's perspective, the meadow around the house was nothing more than a symbol representing boredom.

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Decorating the small cabin built beside the house with flowers had been Sariel's hobby since childhood.

2023/12/10　Lines 2-4 of the first paragraph

Due to her passion for hunting, Sariel had known for many years that beyond the grasslands, there was a forest, and further beyond that, there was a town.

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Based on her hunting experience, Sariel had a vague understanding that beyond the grasslands, there stretched a forest, and further beyond that, there was somehow a town.

2023/12/10　Lines 4-6 of the first paragraph

However, Sariel remained unaware of what lay beyond the town, and even her father wore an expression suggesting he, too, did not know.

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However, Sariel had no idea how large the presence beyond the forest, leading to the town, might be, and even her father seemed unaware of it.

2023/12/11　Lines 6-8 of the first paragraph

It might be a village where wizards dwell or perhaps the rumored cave of giant tribes, but in the current situation, Sariel had no hints, not to mention any clues, to explore it.

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Is it because it is too large that it has even encroached underground?

2023/12/11　Lines 6-7 of the first paragraph

Sariel felt excited.

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Sariel wanted to know so badly, she couldn't help herself.

2023/12/11　Lines 7-8 of the first paragraph

I attempted to forget those feelings by sweating while doing a thorough cleaning, but it had absolutely no effect.

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Sariel tried to suppress those feelings, but it only backfired. With heightened emotions, she completed the preparations for a small adventure.

2023/12/11　Lines 9-10 of the first paragraph

After quietly locking the house, Sariel decided to head towards the forest with a brisk pace.

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And leaving the matters of the house to her father, Sariel, alone, stepped out and began to walk through the meadow.

2023/12/12　Lines 10-13 of the first paragraph

With each step forward, the sound of metal clashing emanated from the shoulder bag. Sariel knew it was the sound of metal coming from a pouch adorned with numerous stainless steel keyholders.

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With each step, something seemed on the verge of leaping out from the belongings she carried, but it was because Sariel's bag was very small. Nevertheless, Sariel treasured that bag dearly and never let it go.

2023/12/12　Lines 13-14 of the first paragraph

As the meadow area neared its end, and the sun began to set, looking up at the sky revealed a flock of birds returning to the forest.

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Trees became more noticeable around the meadow, and when Sariel happened to check the sky, she could faintly see stars, although not very clearly.

2023/12/13　Lines 15-16 of the first paragraph

And as the forest began to come into view in the distance, faint howls of beasts reached her ears.

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And as Sariel approached the forest, despite the darkening sky, she was moved by the various trees adorned with vibrant leaves. The ever-changing appearance of the forest throughout the seasons was wonderfully beautiful, and Sariel had no doubt that whatever lay beyond the town would bring even more awe-inspiring sights.

2023/12/13　Lines 20-21 of the second paragraph

Sariel imagined what lay beyond the town, and it surely was something freshly unreal. The rich imagination provided vitality to the weary Sariel.

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Sariel let her mind wander to the distant scenery, inspiring herself.

2023/12/14　Lines 20-23 of the second paragraph

Every time Sariel felt the muscles' protest, she gritted her teeth and endured it.

Sariel determined to ascertain the truth, resolved to go to the scene herself and confirm it with her own eyes.

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Therefore, Sariel, by forcibly cheering herself up, resolved to overcome the pain in her muscles and firmly determined to etch into her memory the place that would undoubtedly become an unforgettable landscape.

2023/12/15　Lines 23-24 of the second paragraph

The grassland transformed into a forest, and a pleasant breeze, now carrying a chill, swept over Sariel.

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Still, for Sariel, moving with sore legs over a long distance is undeniably challenging.

2023/12/15　Lines 24-26 of the second paragraph

If Sariel were to pass through the forest, she would likely lose a significant amount of time. Sariel didn't mind it; rather, she even thought that there might be something of value awaiting her.

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If, without stopping in that state, Sariel were to try to pass through the forest, her legs would become even more precarious, and there would be a possibility of losing her life within the forest. However, Sariel, even with increased risks, did not want to stop.

2023/12/15　Lines 27-29 of the second paragraph

Therefore, Sariel walked leisurely along the artificially crafted path, presumably made by someone, heading towards the town without any hurry.

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Therefore, Sariel hurried ahead.

2023/12/18　Lines 29-30 of the third paragraph

However, the forest stubbornly refused to show anything other than the same forest, no matter how much time passed.

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However, due to the vastness of the forest, Sariel continued to walk within it for an extended period.

2023/12/18　Lines 30-31 of the third paragraph

And so, the artificial path inexplicably turned into a beast trail, causing some unease for Sariel.

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Still, there was nothing resembling a path except for the trail created by the beasts, continuing to unsettle Sariel.

2023/12/21　Lines 31-33 of the third paragraph

Eventually, the path was obstructed by massive rock faces, steep slopes, and tangled weeds, causing Sariel to give up on moving forward and turn back for the time being.

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And then, the path suddenly disappeared, and in its place, Sariel found a hole ahead that she couldn't see into.

2023/12/21　Lines 32-33 of the third paragraph

While Sariel was detouring and searching for a safe route, she came across fresh tracks of a beast.

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While Sariel was cautiously advancing to avoid the hole, she happened to notice unusually large footprints near the opening. Overwhelmed by fear, she felt like her voice might escape, but she managed to hold it in by covering her mouth.

2023/12/23　Lines 35-37 of the third paragraph

Feeling both danger and drowsiness simultaneously, Sariel lay down in a somewhat open space, a little away from the footprints.

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Sariel trembled with fear and cold, feeling a strong drowsiness. However, she continued to walk until the area with the large footprints was completely out of sight. Once she reached a place where safety could be ensured, she lay down, closed her eyes.

2023/12/25　Lines 40-41 of the fourth paragraph

After a while, feeling discomfort from insects crawling on her body, Sariel woke up, brushed off the bugs, and then began moving through the forest.

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Sariel reflexively jolted upright at the sound of a branch falling to the ground, quickly fleeing from the spot.

2023/12/25　Lines 41-43 of the fourth paragraph

As Sariel emerged from the forest and passed through the gate that marked the entrance to the town, the distant calls of wildlife faded away, replaced by the bustling chatter of people.

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Having exited the forest, Sariel entered the town, and near its outskirts, she was warmly welcomed by the townspeople.

2023/12/26　Lines 43-45 of the fourth paragraph

As Sariel walked through the town for an extended period, growing weary of the repetitive scenery, she couldn't help but acknowledge that beyond the town, a fantastical world did not unfold.

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Sariel, while appreciating the blessings of the townspeople, gradually came to realize as she continued walking.

2023/12/28　Lines 44-45 of the fourth paragraph

Beyond the town, all there was to be found was a mundane, uninspiring reality.

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Beyond the town, there was nothing that heightened the excitement Sariel had imagined.

2023/12/28　Lines 45-46 of the fourth paragraph

Overwhelmed by the extreme dullness, Sariel regretted her own actions and felt as if her knees might buckle beneath her.

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Overwhelmed by the profound sadness, Sariel felt the urge to blame herself out loud.