Re:Sentences

Changed Points : Fourteenth Iteration

2024/8/18　Line 1 of the first paragraph

Sara had been regretting her past of hitting the wall and running away.

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Sara was shy and passive, reluctant to engage in anything.

2024/8/18　Lines 1-2 of the first paragraph

However, she strongly felt that she wanted to change herself from now on.

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However, she had been feeling that she wanted to improve this aspect of her personality for herself.

2024/8/18　Lines 2-3 of the first paragraph

She was already prepared in her heart.

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She couldn't put off anything anymore.

2024/8/18　Lines 3-4 of the first paragraph

All she needed were action and the courage to push forward into the future.

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Having made up her mind, Sara vowed to lead a different life, with the support of those around her.

2024/8/18　Line 6 of the second paragraph

And when she took that first step, something changed within her.

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When she started to be proactive, more and more people started to like her.

2024/8/22　Lines 7-8 of the second paragraph

Realizing it, she continued to sacrifice something at every opportunity and kept moving forward.

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She felt this and continued to challenge her goals with the help of those around her.

2024/8/22　Lines 7-9 of the second paragraph

However, despite her efforts, she couldn't get any closer to her dreams, and months turned into years.

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However, despite her expectations, the results were not always satisfactory.

2024/8/23　Lines 8-10 of the second paragraph

She reached her mental limit, feeling even irritated. For that reason, she needed something to serve as a trigger to relieve stress.

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Was it because of lack of effort? Or was it because of bad luck? It was just too much, and she couldn't even bring herself to blame.

2024/12/1　Lines 12 of the third paragraph

So she sought advice from her friend. Thus, she was recommended to do something.

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