Re:Sentences

Changed Points : Sixth Iteration

2024/2/25　Line 1 of the first paragraph

Sariel enjoyed observing animals, and often, as a result, she would catch them.

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For Sariel, animals were subjects of play and companions.

2024/2/25　Lines 1-3 of the first paragraph

But, Sariel believed that, in addition to the animals she had caught, there were small creatures of mythical existence.

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But, Sariel gradually began to think that there might be undiscovered animals hiding somewhere.

2024/2/26　Lines 2-4 of the first paragraph

However, for Sariel, who had never seen these creatures before, it was impossible to know where exactly these beings were inhabiting.

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Sariel thought that perhaps she just didn't know, and they might be moving around nearby.

2024/2/28　Lines 4-5 of the first paragraph

So, she searched through the books in the study and visited friends living nearby, asking if they knew anything, but I couldn't obtain any useful information.

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So, she explored the nearby area but couldn't find anything.

2024/3/1　Lines 4-6 of the first paragraph

Eager to do so, Sariel then decided to try and capture them in photographs, and she persuaded a friend to lend her a camera.

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Nevertheless, she didn't give up and decided to expand the search area even further.

2024/3/4　Lines 7-8 of the second paragraph

Without thinking about what lies ahead, Sariel checked the condition of her shoes before walking towards the perilous forest.

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Sariel confirmed the feel of the soil and began to walk.

2024/3/4　Lines 7-9 of the second paragraph

Having checked the comfort of her steps, Sariel, singing a tune under her breath, proceeded little by little, step by step, moving forward.

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And the distance she walked gradually became a little longer.

2024/3/5　Lines 8-9 of the second paragraph

Even when walking a long distance, Sariel could feel comfort was because of that.

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Yet, Sariel did not tire for a while.

2024/3/8　Lines 8-9 of the second paragraph

Sariel didn't realize it until much later.

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That was because she was accustomed to the experience.

2024/3/8　Lines 9-10 of the second paragraph

The stems of the plants growing on the ground were initially low, but gradually they began to obstruct Sariel's path.

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And gradually, the path began to transform into a narrow and rough stone pathway.

2024/3/8　Lines 10-11 of the second paragraph

It was an area where not only humans but even animals seldom walked, so there was no way around it.

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The reason was that the path itself was not paved, but there was no doubt that passing through it was a shortcut for exploration.

2024/3/8　Lines 11-12 of the second paragraph

And Sariel gazed at the scenery visible in the distance.

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And she closed her eyes, imagining the images of them that floated in her mind.

2024/3/12　Lines 12-13 of the second paragraph

Like trees standing resilient against the blowing wind, do small creatures also live robustly?

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What appearance do the unknown creatures, those that do not reveal themselves, have?

2024/3/12　Line 15 of the third paragraph

To unveil their way of life, Sariel recalled a promise with her friends.

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To understand them, she recalled her initial feelings, realizing that they still smoldered within her.

2024/3/26　Line 16-17 of the third paragraph

Therefore, Sariel needed to discover unknown small creatures at all costs.

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For that reason, Sariel aimed to obtain tangible evidence of the presence of unknown creatures.

2024/3/29　Line 17 of the third paragraph

It was a challenge that seemed almost impossible.

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It was her own wish.

2024/3/29　Lines 17-18 of the third paragraph

At least, if Sariel turn back now, there will be no more time wasted.

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But, there is no guarantee that it will necessarily come to fruition.

2024/3/30　Lines 18-19 of the third paragraph

However, Sariel did not change her own will. She did not doubt it.

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However, more than anyone else, Sariel believed in herself.

2024/4/2　Lines 21-22 of the fourth paragraph

However, there was no passable path anywhere, and it was a situation where one had to either force their way through.

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However, in every seemingly passable path, there was invariably a problem.

2024/4/2　Lines 21-22 of the fourth paragraph

This made Sariel feel troublesome.

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As a result, Sariel ended up with minor injuries.

2024/4/3　Lines 22-23 of the fourth paragraph

And as it transformed into an easy-to-walk path, she noticed something lying in the middle of the road.

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Undeterred, she continued to move forward and discovered signs of an incident that had occurred in that location.

2024/4/10　Lines 23-24 of the fourth paragraph

It was a part of a limb, accompanied by fresh bloodstains.

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It was human flesh that had begun to rot, emitting a foul odor.

2024/4/10　Lines 24-25 of the fourth paragraph

Sariel felt nauseated to the point where she almost wanted to vomit, but Sariel managed to endure it somehow.

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She felt an irresistible urge to touch it but, considering the consequences, she withdrew her hand.

2024/4/10　Lines 25-26 of the fourth paragraph

Sariel carefully observed her surroundings while being mindful not to make any noise.

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She looked around to see if there were any other abnormalities in the area.

2024/4/15　Lines 26-28 of the fourth paragraph

Though it seemed like there was nothing, it was not certain, and there might be a lurking threat ready to attack at any moment.

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While it seemed like there was nothing, there might have been a lurking threat in the vicinity.

2024/4/17　Lines 27-28 of the fourth paragraph

Nevertheless, Sariel maintained a low posture and left the area.

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Intuitively, Sariel immediately left the scene and moved forward.

2024/4/17　Lines 28-29 of the fourth paragraph

Continuing her journey and settling on a sleeping spot, Sariel took rest there.

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Without stopping her progress, she finally found a place that seemed safe, and she settled down there.

2024/4/21　Lines 29-30 of the fourth paragraph

However, to be honest, she wasn't quite sure exactly where that place was.

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Coincidentally, at that location, there was an item from her memories that she had thought she had lost.

2024/4/23　Line 32 of the fifth paragraph

Sariel realized that she had woken up near a river and had been sleeping.

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As dawn broke, Sariel noticed the sound of something coming from somewhere.

2024/4/23　Lines 33-34 of the fifth paragraph

Continuing along that path, a place that clearly seemed to be crafted by human hands appeared.

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Moving in that direction, unfamiliar things came into view.

2024/4/24　Lines 33-35 of the fifth paragraph

Surprised by the unexpected turn of events, Sariel decided to enter determinedly. From the appearance of the town, Sariel came to learn the truth.

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Despite her skeptical thoughts, judging from the appearance of the settlement, she could not help but draw an inconvenient conclusion for herself.

2024/4/28　Lines 35-36 of the fifth paragraph

The imaginary entity that Sariel had envisioned was never there from the beginning.

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The creature Sariel had imagined was nothing more than a fantastical entity, created by the people of the village as an object of worship.

2024/4/28　Line 37 of the fifth paragraph

Sariel was ashamed of her actions until now.

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Unable to gain anything, Sariel had no choice but to retrace her steps and return the way she came.