Re:Sentences

Changed Points : Eighth Iteration

2024/7/5　Line 1 of the first paragraph

For Sariel, nature was a beloved presence.

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For her, nature was a maternal presence.

2024/7/10　Lines 1-2 of the first paragraph

However, at the same time, it was also an object of fear.

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Therefore, more than anyone else, she wanted to understand that presence.

2024/7/12　Lines 2-3 of the first paragraph

She thought that perhaps she just didn't know, and nature might be hiding something.

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She decided to delve into a mystery that no one else knew about.

2024/7/12　Lines 3-4 of the first paragraph

So she observed the surroundings carefully, scanning every inch, but couldn't find anything.

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However, wandering around aimlessly won't get her anywhere.

2024/7/14　Line 4 of the first paragraph

Thinking that, she decided to extend her legs even further into the distance.

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She thought she would venture into places she wouldn't normally tread.

2024/7/17　Lines 6-7 of the second paragraph

She did some warm-up exercises before starting to walk. And the walking speed gradually increased, but she did not need a break.

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For her, long-distance walking was no different from a casual stroll, and she didn't need any special preparations.

2024/7/18　Lines 7-8 of the second paragraph

That was because she understood herself well and had confidence in her physical strength.

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Because to her, long-distance walking was nothing more than a part of her everyday life.

2024/7/19　Lines 8-10 of the second paragraph

And the path began to transform into a bumpy and uneven road. The reason was that it was an untouched area, but at the same time, it was a route she was accustomed to walking.

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However, the course ahead led through unfamiliar terrain, gradually sapping her strength.

2024/7/19　Lines 9-10 of the second paragraph

And she stopped, with a question arising in her mind.

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She was walking while pondering in her mind.

2024/7/21　Line 10 of the second paragraph

What could be the hidden aspects of nature?

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Why am I walking in a place like this?

2024/7/24　Lines 12-13 of the third paragraph

She recalled her initial goal. For that reason, therefore, Sariel wanted visible and definite evidence.

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She reflected on the events leading up to this moment. Not only that, but it was also necessary to keep in mind how to deal with encountering risks.

2024/7/25　Lines 13-14 of the third paragraph

The tools for that purpose were brought along.

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All the necessary items for that purpose were carried with her.

2024/7/25　Lines 14-15 of the third paragraph

But, there is no guarantee that they will necessarily be useful.

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Nevertheless, relying solely on one's own belongings is reckless.

2024/7/25　Line 15 of the third paragraph

She understood that well enough and carried it with her.

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She had keenly felt it to the point of pain until now.

2024/7/26　Line 17 of the fourth paragraph

She accidentally bumped into something while walking.

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After walking for a while, she tripped over something carelessly and collided with the ground.

2024/7/26　Line 18 of the fourth paragraph

Consequently, she ended up injuring her foot.

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As a result, she suffered a wound severe enough to draw blood.

2024/7/27　Lines 18-20 of the fourth paragraph

When she tried to stand up nonetheless, she sensed something was amiss and directed her gaze downward.

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Nevertheless, as she made a determined effort to raise her upper body and walk again, she found something that shouldn't normally be there in her field of vision.

2024/7/29　Lines 20-21 of the fourth paragraph

For some reason, human bones were buried in the ground.

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It was undoubtedly a trap.

2024/7/29　Line 21 of the fourth paragraph

Fear prevailed over curiosity.

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There was a clear intention to capture something.

2024/7/30　Lines 21-23 of the fourth paragraph

As she looked around for any other anomalies, similar objects were found everywhere, further instilling fear in her.

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As she looked around for any other anomalies, she quickly found others.

2024/7/31　Lines 22-24 of the fourth paragraph

Feeling uneasy, Sariel ran away as if fleeing, and when she became out of breath, she began walking again.

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She had a bad feeling and refused to stay there any longer.

2024/8/1　Lines 23-25 of the fourth paragraph

After moving for a while, she discovered a place where she could settle down, and having done so, she set up a tent and completed preparations for rest.

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After walking for a long time and feeling tired, she fell asleep while looking at the starry sky hovering above, feeling the breeze.

2024/8/2　Lines 24-26 of the fourth paragraph

By chance, there were traces suggesting that something had been there just moments before, yet she chose to ignore them.

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The pleasant evening was undoubtedly perfect for taking a rest.

2024/8/2　Line 27 of the fifth paragraph

In the dead of night, she woke up to a loud noise coming from somewhere.

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However, before dawn broke, she was fully awake.

2024/8/4　Lines 27-28 of the fifth paragraph

As she approached the source of the noise, it appeared that a large crowd of people had gathered around something.

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As she walked quietly, she found them in the midst of what seemed like a ceremony, and she didn't feel inclined to disturb them.

2024/8/7　Lines 29-31 of the fifth paragraph

She had to draw a conclusion that was contrary to her own hopes, and she couldn't readily accept it. The dreams and hopes that Sariel had were never there from the beginning.

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She was left speechless by the unexpected turn of events and couldn't enjoy the ceremony's atmosphere.

2024/8/7　Line 30 of the fifth paragraph

She could only gaze blankly at reality.

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Still, the connection formed in the heart with those people, even without a shared language, was a profound experience.