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かと思いましたのでご報告までに

不意打ちのキスは危ない！

朝は特に、せっかく落ち着いたモノも落ち着かなくなるから……(´д`)

それにしても
寝癖氷姫可愛いなw

車の中でげっそり寝ていた姿が目に浮かびます(´ω｀)

季里ちゃんはツヤツヤw

なんというブルジョアたち(´･ω･`)

別荘も温泉旅館も……実に羨ましい(>д<)

ナチュラルにバレるような行動w

しかし、名前呼びはキくなぁ……(･ω･)

正直に話したのはよかった(･ω･)

でも、内容が内容だけに、一撃ですんでよかったw

白石さん、なんとも積極的なアクションの女性(ﾟДﾟ)

水着選びは流石にヤラれましたね(>д<)

「ばかみたいな噂話を信じているあなたこそ何処のどなたなの？」

スッキリ爽快、
余計なお世話よね(´ω｀)

噂だけで判断するような人間には、ロクなのいないから(･ω･)

名前に使ってる文字のJIS水準で話が広げられるって、ここの子みんな頭いいな！？w

にしても……隠す気は全くないですね。
そこがいい！(ﾟ∀ﾟ)

気の所為ならどうでもいけどね。わかった飯にしよう
→気の所為ならどうでもいけどね。わかった飯にしよう。あとマコちゃん（略）


おはよう、誠彦くん。朝からわからないこと言わないで
→おはよう、誠彦くん。朝からわけのわからないこと言わないで


帰りの車も真田さんが迎えに来てくれた。
→帰りも真田さんが車で迎えに来てくれた。

　おー、みすていく。
　ちょいと修正（汗）


最初の出発地点の駅前
→集合場所の駅前


ご飯は冷凍ご飯があるので
→ご飯は冷凍してあるので　？
→ご飯は冷凍庫にストックしてあるので　？

彼女が誠彦のことが気になりだした
→彼女が誠彦のことを気になりだした


今はバレーボールに打ち込んでいるの。女は二の次ってね
→今はバレーボールに打ち込んでいるんだ。女は二の次だね　？
→今はバレーボールに打ち込んでいるから、女は二の次だ　？

部屋でぼーっと三人で冷蔵庫にあったアイスクリームを
→部屋でぼーっとしつつ冷蔵庫にあったアイスクリームを三人で


湯上がりに浴衣に着替えた
→湯上がりの浴衣に着替えた　？
→湯上がりに浴衣へ着替えた　？


バレーボールだけになっちまうからこの旅行はホント楽しめて
→バレーボールだけになっちまうから、この旅行はホント楽しめて

かわって今は朝の九時
→明けて今は朝の九時　？
→一夜明けて今は朝の九時　？


坊っちゃんとご一緒に我が旅館においで頂ける
→坊っちゃんとご一緒に我が旅館へおいで頂ける　？
→坊っちゃんとご一緒に我が宿へおいで頂ける　？


昼過ぎに戸田の市街地にある食堂で昼ごはんを食べたあとに
→昼は戸田の市街地にある食堂で昼ごはんを食べたあと、　？


俊介の親父さんのところの旅館
→俊介の親父さんが営んでいる旅館　？


迎えの方がマイクロバスでやってきた
→迎えのマイクロバスでやってきた　？


流石に二〇人以上乗れるバスなので
→二〇席ほどあるので　？


この二人意外にも気があったようで
→この二人意外にも気が合ったようで
※「有った」との誤読防止


途中は山道になりますので右へ左へとよく揺れると思いますので
→途中は山道になりますので右へ左へとよく揺れてしまいますため　？
→途中は山道で左右によく揺れますため　？


結構時間はかかるものと考えていたけど
→結構時間はかかるものと覚悟していたけど　？


こっちじゃなくて別棟の離れなんだ
→こっちじゃなくて別棟の方なんだ　？
→こっちじゃなくて奥にある離れの方なんだ

水面それぞれ楽しめたみたいで
→皆もそれぞれ楽しめたみたいで


それが出来るのがすごい
→それを出来るのがすごい　？
→それが出来るのはすごい　？

波がないのは海に来た感じが少し削がれた感じがして物足りない気もするが
→波がないのは海に来た感じが少し削がれて物足りない気もするが　？
→波がないのは海に来た感じが少し削がれた気がして物足りないが　？

Thanks for the hard work, it was an interesting love comedy, I'll look forward to the continuation, I've other reading to catch up on, but I'm planning to try your other completed works. Looks like you have 7 ways for more story lines depending on the perspective you use.

Unrequited love, Kirari was looking at Mako from afar with love in her eyes, but she waited to long and he met Kiri. Shunsuke was looking at Kirari the same, he noticed her feelings for Mako, and he didn't talk to her, then late the last night of the trip, at the hot spring, he approached her, he told her that he had been watching her and knew how she felt about Mako, she said that she had thought up the trip for some last memories before letting him go, then Shunsuke let her know how he felt about her, and that he hadn't said anything before because of the way she felt about Mako, but he was letting her know now because Mako had a girlfriend, they talked for awhile and decided to start out as friends. It was a sweet moment, now there are three couples, only Miina is left out of a relationship. thanks.

more male bonding and talk of part time jobs and what they are planning for the rest of the summer. are the girls also doing similar things? thanks.

Mako almost gave away that him and Kiri were living together, but he quickly covered it up by saying that he about Kiri's long baths from visiting her at her house, than Yuya backed him up by mentioning that Mizumi also took long baths. thanks.

everyone enjoyed playing on the beach and snorkeling, while the girls were showering, the boys cleaned the beach equipment and talked about what they had done at the beach, a nice bonding experience. Thanks.

There was trouble, but a little quick thinking and it was over, now it's time to toss the beach ball around, why would Mako expect Kiri to try a porori on the beach in front of everyone, her answer was good only for him. thanks. I'm looking foreword to checking out your other works.

Kiri is still tempting Mako, she wants to feel his touch to ease her loneliness, she also loves to tease him by touching his body, that why she bought the racy bikini to tease Mako, the others give them a little time and space to talk to each other, and play a little, then everyone gets together to have fun. The boys went to buy shaved ice, and when they came back there was a strange man talking to the girls, is this a flag to something happening? Thanks.

A unequal mixed summer beach party, four females and three males, is the hostess the odd one out? everyone got along on the first night, so what will the day at the beach bring? Kiri and Mako took time for a kiss before the others woke up, they'll get their sweet time in, as they can. thanks.

あー……。
良きものを……見させていただきました……(´ω｀)
季里ちゃん視点尊い……。

If Seihiko is not careful all his and Kiri's secrets will come out.

Two classmates with family places within 40 minutes of each other , a villa and a hot spring resort. What will the summer bring?

Mis Shiraishi is very observant of Seihiko, she asked to be called by first name, but is embarrassed when called by the boys especially by Seihiko; she jumps; she barged in on the study session just to get closer to Seihiko. Seihiko is ignorant of what she's doing.

because Kiri and Seihiko don't really know each other, and the fact that Seihiko didn't say anything about Shiraishi the first time, it added up to Kiri over reacting, Seihiko was to docile in accepting her actions, accepting the full blame himself.

Mis Shiraishi definitely has some reason to hang around Seihiko, ether she likes him, or she knows him from the past, and he doesn't recognize her, or could she be a friend of his ex? There's only one reason a girl will show off her body to a boy in a string bikini in a store without being embarrassed, the beach is a different story, than chose a modest swim suit, and inviting him and his friends to the beach in the summer, when she couldn't get him alone.

Kiri is doing what comes naturally with out thinking about the promise that Seihiko made with his dad or that he needs to get better grades, she's very selfish.

it had to come out some time!

as usual Kiri's point of view is good and adds to the tail, she was so carried away that she didn't feel what her body felt, all she knew was mental, she was so happy and excited to finally be one in body and soul with Seihiko that she was delusional. Even so it turned out to be a good first time for her, although she almost let the idea that the reason that Seihiko was so gentle and kind to her was because of his ex-girlfriend, but she let it go before it spoiled her moment of giving herself for the first time. Seihiko did learn from his ex, but it was more from how they were broken up and what happened after, that he learned what was needed to be done when treating a girl right and not having any regrets between the two of them. he had a lot of regrets and unfulfilled thoughts and things he wished he could make up for, and apologies he needed to make to her and her family. he didn't won't that again.

Kiri is already counting on siblings, I wonder if her dad knows that. Kiri was helped by Seihiko's story about his stepdad. It was easier to accept a new stepmom.

Three boxes! Kiri's expectations are high, it'll be hard to best the ex-girlfriend, but she's going to give it a good try, to do it as fast as she can, she wants to be his last time for the rest of their lives together. "SWEET: SWEET: SWEET and SWEET" they make an extremely cute pair,

Kiri is delighted with Seihiko's parents approval to live together and date each other, now she feels that she will sleep with Seihiko every night

Seihiko is more nervous than Kiri because he didn't expect his whole family. Miina is seriously cute, Seihiko hasn't seen that in a while. I wonder if Jun's brother mentioned that Jun had seen the two of them in town before? His mother suspected why he was coming home when he said it would be two of them, that's why every one is there.

there is going to be a shambles because he didn't tell Kiri about Mis Shiraishi. Is Mis Shiraishi interested in Seihiko? Or is she curious because she over heard what Shunsuke was saying to Seihiko about Kiri. Could he have gone to the ticket booth and gotten a refund?

Shunsuke isn't the only one who knows about the couple, it's just that no one has said anything yet, but they will.

Seeing Kiri's perspective is nice, it lets us see how close their thoughts are and gives more depth to the story, it helps to show how awkward they both feel, and it shows the caring between them, when one of them has a hard time the other one will through out a life line for a diversion, even though they have a hard time talking.

Seihiko needs to make an appointment for him and Kiri to go to his parents house as soon as possible, like the next holiday. Once that is taken care of, they still need to take it slow and get to know each other better, or there will be more surprises to come.

Seihiko and Kiri both had a bad day, they couldn't do their school work, and Kiri's friend called her on it, now they are headed to pick up Kiri's father.

Kiri was jealous at first that she couldn't have his first time, but than she realized it wasn't that important if he loved her like she loved him, she is worried about telling her parents, that they might tell them to break up, but three more birthdays and she can do whatever she wants. As they say below, a man wants the first, a woman wants the last, some men don't care about the first as long as their the last.

Kiri was shocked at hearing what she didn't expect to hear, she didn't want to believe so she made him repeat what she needed clarification on, she was so shocked she didn't notice the pain that Seihiko was in. She pushed him so hard that she ended up being broken.

Kiri focused on the actions not the feelings, it was more important to her what he had done before they met, she couldn't understand that if he had been in a house alone with another girl and had sex with her , why didn't he act out with her, it made her feel like he didn't like her, or she wasn't pretty enough for him, so what was wrong with her? It was hard for her to understand his reasoning, until he made her understand that he regretted what he had done so much he didn't want it to happen again, because she was ready to give him her body to do what ever he wanted to, she feels that they will always be together, and that it is the best way to show him her total love.

So the romance in middle school was very hot, and her mother broke them up, the heart brake explains part of his thick headedness, also after that affair he realized he hadn't thought long or deep enough about how each of their lives would be affected, he still has strong feelings of regret from that time, and he hasn't healed yet ,so he is not ready to take the plunge again, he doesn't want to hurt anyone else. He doesn't forget the affection shown by his family.

Kiri is still getting bolder and more aggressive, now she has her female friends involved, Seihiko won't be able to run much longer. he still believes that she is only doing it because he helped her, he doesn't understand that her teasing is her true feelings. Their more and more like close siblings.

Kiri wanted to know more about how Seihiko grew up and was hoping they would meet someone who could tell her more, she really wants to meet his family to form a bond with them as to tighten the chains around Seihiko more. So Seihiko had a girlfriend in middle school, does he not want to talk about it because there was a problem.

Kiri is getting more aggressive the more they are together, she loves the date aspect of the day, but Seihiko doesn't catch on to the fact that that is what she thinking and feeling, he's very thick headed, trying to hide how he feels about Kiri without realizing how she feels about him. she was so excited because she was enjoying being on a motorcycle date with Seihiko, and seeing new country, and she really wanted to have a lot of happy memories of the date.

Kiri was offering her whole self to Seihiko, because he saved her and she likes him so much, she would do anything to be with him forever, Seihiko has been hiding how he feels about Kiri, but he feels the same way about her, he's afraid that because he helped her that she feels obligated to him to much to say anything.

Kiri had a red face because she wants to get closer to Seihiko, she just hasn't got it figured out how to do it yet, when he said family it hit to close to her thoughts, she enjoys taking care of Seihiko, it makes her feel like a house wife, without benefits. Seihiko doesn't know he is in a training camp for her future husband.

Kiri has used the word 'VIRGIN' twice now, is she hinting to Seihiko about some thing, or is she looking for something from him? The rice that Seihiko gets from Kiri is probably worth more then the rent. They act like a brother and sister right now. Seihiko is going to have to study hard if he doesn't want to be looked down on.

It often happens you do a good deed, and get yelled at for over doing the rough stuff, and then someone will talk about the damage without telling about the good deed. If Seihiko had tried to correct the rumor's it would've just gotten worse.

At first I thought Kiri was still talking on the school podium, but then I realized she was thinking about her first day with Seihiko, in more detail than was explained before. There is an undertone to what she is saying, that google doesn't relay. Kiri seems to be real happy with meeting Seihiko, and being around him, she's a little confused that he ran off from her when they got close to the school.

So the MC is kind of a bad boy at school before, Kiri is the top student of the first years, they are quite the combo. Another flag, it looks like a busy, troublesome school year ahead for Seihiko and Kiri. Keeping it interesting

They need to discus times about the bath! And why would the boys call her an ugly woman ("Hey, Busu!"), were they trying to get her attention or her goat?

Flags are waving all over the place. Will lucky pervert show up? they are close in age, about a year apart.

To bad he didn't move a year ago, he would have had higher grade point standings.

Cherry Blossom viewing is a nice opening. I hope the rest of the story is good.

サブタイトル回収がこうくるのか(ﾟ∀ﾟ)

うまい！

長瀞よく行きます。秩父の街も出てくるのかな？楽しみです。
味噌豚丼がなっから旨いっすよね。

あら？
更新されない！
公式からクレーム付いたかな？

チタンより硬いけど軽い口っていいなぁw

リアルで使っちゃお(ﾟ∀ﾟ)

浮気が〜って展開にしたいのは分かるけど付き合ってからなんの断りもなく異性と2人で出かけるのは主人公の評判落すだけやからやめた方がいい

さぁ、一方の牙城は崩れたぞ(`･ω･´)

どんなお父さんなのかな……うーん気になる(´ω｀)

危ない危ない……！

夏休みに海に僕らみんなを
→夏休みに海へ僕らみんなを
→夏休みに僕らみんなを海に

大型商業施設に買い物に出かけて
→大型商業施設へ買い物に出かけて
→大型商業施設まで買い物に出かけて

「「それに、季里。君も僕のことを〜」」
→「『それに、季里。君も僕のことを〜』」

白石さんが実はお嬢様でプライベートビーチ付きの別荘にご招待とかでしょうか……？

さぁ、退路は断たれた(ﾟДﾟ)

白石ちゃんと放課後水着お買い物デート？！白石ちゃんも水着を選ばせるということは……？

こっちも運営からクレームが付かなければ良いのだけどw

いっそ、怒ってくれたなら

殴ってくれたなら

その方が楽だったかもしれないんだよね……


＞愛情ですね……(´ω｀)

季里ちゃんと保健体育のお勉強うらやまけしからん……！（笑）

やはり、信じてくれる人がいると安心(´ω｀)

いろいろと救われますね。

ともあれ、攻め攻めの季里ちゃんに
ナイス援護射撃の凛ちゃん……
ここで逃亡とは、
今回はこっちが言わざるを得ない……
童貞くんめ……(´･ω･`)

田舎のヤンキー……。
いるよね、こういう人(´ω｀)

悪い人じゃあ……ないんだろうなたぶんw

学食で待ち合わせて一緒に食べる時点で隠し通すのは無理ですよね……（笑）

この童貞……

いや、ピュアピュア君めw

遠くから応援しちゃうぞ(`･ω･´)

今回は誠彦くん、一本かな(´ω｀)

赤くなってるし

季里ちゃん視点良かったです。これから身体も開発されて行くのでしょうね……（笑）

どうしても童貞くん評価がどこかにあるw

がんばれ誠彦w

良い友達がいて、良かった(´ω｀)

このヒロイン
性欲強いぞー　誠彦君ファイト

いきなり３箱ってヤる気満々じゃないですかー！（笑）

これは、なかなか気付かない

いや、なかなか気付けない……
「自分に気があるかも？」
って思い込んで勘違いだったら恥ずかしいアレでアレがうわぁぁぁ(´д`)

「童貞っぽくどもるところでしょうが」に笑っちゃったw

どストレートw

家族みんなに認めてもらえて良かったですね！

家族に対しては『マコ』呼びに突っ込まないのねw

なんとまさかの家族全員集合！果たして上手く行くのでしょうか……？

これはバレてますね（笑）そして桒原くんチョコミン党を敵に回しましたね！

バレバレですね（笑）

とりあえず良かったですね！

これはお互い気まずいですね……

早く誠彦の親に話を通さないとですね！（笑）

まぁ正直に話すしかないですよね……（笑）

「男はその女の最初の男になりたがる。女はその男の最後の女になりたがる」
オスカー・ワイルドの言葉ですね。

実物はないけど
→フィクションだけど　？

顔もスタイルも性格もみんなかわいい君がしょっちゅう僕の目の前を甘い香りを漂わせながらウロウロしているんだよ
→顔もスタイルも性格もみんなかわいい君が僕の目の前を甘い香りを漂わせながらしょっちゅうウロウロしているんだよ


僕の名前で移転登記していた
→僕の名義に移転登記していた

いつものように学園に一緒に登校をしている。
→いつもと変わらず一緒に（学園へ）登校している。


父とは今や血の繋がり以上の関係を気づけた
→父とは今や血の繋がり以上の関係を築けたと　？
→父とは今や血の繋がり以上の関係に気付けたと　？