第74話 帰宅とJKへの応援コメント
さぁ盛り上がってまいりました
こうゆう大きな切り返しの展開が引き込まれちゃう
第72話 申告とJKへの応援コメント
展開来た!
第58話 文化祭とJK①への応援コメント
ウェディングドレスを選ばせた友達の感性よ良き
第93話 桜花と①への応援コメント
すみません、誤字報告です。
>”得”にこの時期は毎年夏コミの〆切で~
→ ”特”にこの時期は毎年夏コミの〆切で~
>ちなみに同人誌やら(略)から自然と”見”についてしまった。
→ ~から自然と”身”についてしまった。 かと思われます。
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第79話 会話とJKへの応援コメント
すみません、誤字報告です。
>ひまりの竹刀を” ”実の竹刀が受け止める。
→ ひまりの竹刀を”美”実の竹刀が受け止める。
>「前に”行った”通り、来月の半ばには帰ります」
→ 「前に”言った”通り、来月の半ばには帰ります」 かと思われます。
作者からの返信
別箇所も含め、わざわざご報告ありがとうございます!助かります!
第54話 給料とJKへの応援コメント
きちんと考えと思いを伝えることは、大賛成です。何より誠意として共感です。
第50話 幼馴染みと俺②への応援コメント
え、どうするんですかだろう。。。
主人公さんは、優しい方ですから、周囲を惹きつける魅力があるものの、それ故の苦しい悩みになってしまうのかな。今後がドキドキです。
第30話 目玉焼きとJKへの応援コメント
みんなの信頼感が、少しずつ、でも丁寧に積み上がっていく感じが、とても心地よいです。今後の展開も楽しみです。
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ご感想ありがとうございました!
少しでも楽しんで頂けたなら作者冥利に尽きます。
第90話 広い部屋と決意と俺への応援コメント
he's going back to kedo if he can, and it sounds like he's going to say yes to Yuri.
第89話 2度目のお別れと俺への応援コメント
Kazu-nii walked Kanade-san to the train station, to send her home, they were both sad, but when she asked if they could go out to eat again," because I'm your cousin," he said yes, but not because your my cousin, because your Kanade! that made her really happy.
第88話 帰宅とJKへの応援コメント
Himari's return home was almost completely opposite of what she expected.
第87話 さよならとJKへの応援コメント
Kazu-nii said farewell to Himari and went to work. Himari and Kanade made cookies, for good memories before Himari had to leave.
第86話 花火とJK②への応援コメント
Himari confessed to Kazu-nii, and didn't let him answer as she knew he would turn her down.
第85話 花火とJKへの応援コメント
an outing to shoot off fireworks, their going to have some fun
第84話 覚悟とJKへの応援コメント
Himari bought her art supplies.
第83話 退職とJKへの応援コメント
sad but sweet
第82話 待ち合わせと俺への応援コメント
Yuri introduced Kazuki-san to a dojo looking for students and instructors .
第81話 宣言とJKへの応援コメント
Himari let Kanade know that she was planning to confess to Kazuki.
第80話 アイスクリームとJKへの応援コメント
Himari was content as she had settled her problems with Mimi, Kanade was also happy, she was again connected to her mother.
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第79話 会話とJKへの応援コメント
スパーリングマッチでの二人の出会いは斬新で、ミミはひまりの気持ちがいかに強いかを感じることができ、ひまりも完全には向き合っていなかった感情を払拭することができ、二人の女性がかつてあった絆を再確立することができた。 道場によく通っていたひまりは意識を失っていたスパーリングマッチでの二人の出会いは斬新で、ミミはひまりの気持ちがいかに強いかを感じることができ、ひまりも完全には向き合っていなかった感情を払拭することができ、二人の女性がかつてあった絆を再確立することができた。 道場によく通っていたひまりは意識を失っていた
Supāringumatchi de no futari no deai wa zanshinde, Mimi wa hi mari no kimochi ga ikani tsuyoi ka o kanjiru koto ga deki, hi mari mo kanzen ni wa mukiatte inakatta kanjō o fusshoku suru koto ga deki, futari no josei ga katsute atta kizuna o sai kakuritsu suru koto ga dekita. Dōjō ni yoku kayotte ita himari wa ishiki o ushinatte ita
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Supāringumatchi de no futari no deai wa zanshinde, Mimi wa hi mari no kimochi ga ikani tsuyoi ka o kanjiru koto ga deki, hi mari mo kanzen ni wa mukiatte inakatta kanjō o fusshoku suru koto ga deki, futari no josei ga katsute atta kizuna o sai kakuritsu suru koto ga dekita. Dōjō ni yoku kayotte ita himari wa ishiki o ushinatte ita
Show more the meeting of the two in a sparring match was original, it allowed Mimi to feel how strong were Himari's feelings as well as let Himari excise the emotions that hadn't been completely faced, it allowed both women to re-establish a connection that had been lost sense Himari had quite going to the dojo
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第78話 対峙とJKへの応援コメント
Himari met Mimi at a community center where she was asked to put on kendo gear, Mimi was already dressed.
第77話 対話とJK②への応援コメント
complete reconciliation, the last wall was broken
第76話 対話とJKへの応援コメント
Kanade and her mother talked for a while, and came to an understanding as they slowly reconciled, Murakumo who had intruded into Kazui-kun's home and attacked Himari and Kanade while looking for Kanade's mother, had been stalking her, so that was a big part of the reason that she had ran away.
第75話 帰宅とJK②への応援コメント
mother went to a convenience store, while Kanade and Kazu talked, Kanade settled down, and when her mother came back she was ready to talk.
第74話 帰宅とJKへの応援コメント
a surprise meeting, at Kanade's home, her mother.
第73話 再会とJK への応援コメント
Himari and Mimi talked and set up a time and place to meet.
第72話 申告とJKへの応援コメント
Mimi found Himari
第71話 お祝いと俺②への応援コメント
Will Yuri-san be going to work at Kazu-kun's work place.
第70話 お祝いと俺への応援コメント
Isobe talked to Kazu-kun at lunch again, he decided to start dating the woman who confessed to him
第69話 JDとJKへの応援コメント
Kanade wants to go home to exchange clothes from spring to summer, but is that all she is wanting to do. Learned a little more about Himari-kun, that a fellow kendo student is looking for her on her own, for personal reasons,Mimi is her name.
第68話 めんつゆとJKへの応援コメント
Kazu-nii had a mental cooking lesson from Kanade, so he decided to try it out the next night for dinner, to get her back for teasing him.
第67話 相談と俺への応援コメント
Isobe asked Komamura fore advice about how to deal with a woman who had confessed to him, and the only feelings he had for her, was as a good work colleague, who he was friendly with at work, all Komamura could tell him, was to figure out how to answer her by dating her to get to know her better, Isobe accepted that. Komamura felt like Isobe questions were aimed at his heart, as he felt a pain in his chest, he thought about Yuri, and how he needed to learn more about her sense they had ben apart for almost 20 years, and she still liked him from when they were growing together, but at the time he had been ignoring her feelings as he was not at a place where he needed, or wanted more than a close friend, he had things other than romance on his mind, he knew he should be learning more about todays Yuri, but he had not taken the time as of now, he felt uncomfortable, it seemed he was standing still, and all of the sudden he was being overtaken, he had to start looking to answer Yuri's confession soon.
第66話 タピオカとJKへの応援コメント
nice time between Himari and Kanade, enjoying being together, until Kanade was accidently reminded of the text from her mother while looking at a text from a friend.
第65話 パンケーキとJKへの応援コメント
Two JK girls enjoying time together and eating pancakes. SWEET.
第64話 実家とJKへの応援コメント
Himari talked about how she was always having to practice kendo after school and couldn't play with her friends, Kanade asked if she wanted to go out and play after Kanade go out of school the next day.
第63話 バイトとJK②への応援コメント
Himari is slowly maturing, thinking how Takato responded to her rejection of his confession, she was wondering if she would be able to accept it as well, especially if it was Komamura, she didn't think she would be able to see him if she was rejected by him, she would be in to much pain to be around him.
第62話 シンクロとJKへの応援コメント
it was a sweet story. Kanade is maturing, thanking about how to ask for help, she has mixed emotions about Komamura, she has responded to him as a child needing care from an adult, when he hugged her and stroked her head, and as an adult with her feelings of love towards him.
第61話 玉葱とJKへの応援コメント
Komamura learned to shop for easy to prepare ingredients from Kanade, and Himari learned a little about cooking from him, the kitchen scene was sweet.
第60話 帰宅とJKへの応援コメント
Kanade is emotionally spent, the text from her mother really upset her, and it upsets her more that Himari and Komamura are right, that she wouldn't do a good job at cooking, she wouldn't be able to keep her mind on what she was doing, and ruin the meal, at this point she's not even able to be good company. Komamura suspects that Kanade had some sort of contact from her mother, but he will not say anything until she talks first.
第59話 文化祭とJK②への応援コメント
Kanade enjoyed the school festival, but when she got the text from her mother 🚫🆘💦💔🥀🧅😭😱 that said "SORRY" she started crying, she had not felt that there would be contact today,as the picture of the tickets had not been marked read. Kanade had all the feelings that she had buried and ignored hit her all of a sudden, her emotions couldn't be held back any more! Himari had wanted to go to a bookstore after enjoying the festival with Komamura, on the way to the store she saw someone that she knew and knew her family she dragged him into an alleyway to hide,and told Komamura what was going on, he pinned her against the wall where her face was hid, like they were making out, with his arms around her, after a few minutes the woman walked by, and as she did, she locked eyes with him, for an unknown reason he went into shock, and his mind went blank, he didn't recover until Himari got uncomfortable and started calling his name, at that point they cut the detour short and went home, Himari was disstroit and shaken 😭😰( *^-^)ρ(*╯^╰)/(ㄒoㄒ)/~~.
第58話 文化祭とJK①への応援コメント
Himari got a look at Kanade, and she started to drool at her in costume, she was imagining what she could do with Kanade in her costume, when drawing,what a lovely picture she could draw, or the manga that she could make with the story around a young woman in her sexy wedding dress. both Himari and Komamura thought that Kanade was overly cute.
第57話 メイド喫茶とJK②への応援コメント
a cute scene of Himari in her costume working at the maid cafe
第56話 準備とJKへの応援コメント
seek and destroy
第55話 給料とJK②への応援コメント
cute
第54話 給料とJKへの応援コメント
asking Yuri to wait was a complication for both of them.
第53話 漫画とJKへの応援コメント
Himari is feeling homesick, she is also starting to grow up as she starts to think about the feelings of her parents for her.
第52話 不安とJKへの応援コメント
he's worried about Yuri and how he should deal with her. Kanade is feeling comfortable with Kazu-nii, she expressed it, it made him a little happy, felt like she was almost going to confess. Kazu-nii is thinking of Kanade staying till she graduates high school.
第51話 連絡とJKへの応援コメント
a date after work the next day.
第50話 幼馴染みと俺②への応援コメント
Shock!! Yuri confessed, he never understood her, poor Yuri, now there are two rivales.
第49話 飲み会と俺への応援コメント
he ignores the hints of the OFL's, Office Ladys, and forgets about Yuri, thinks only about the two waiting at home for him, even though it's troublesome.
第48話 友達とJKへの応援コメント
fun
第47話 お出かけとJKへの応援コメント
they both have feelings for him.
第46話 未遂とJK②への応援コメント
Kazuki recalled an event with Yuri at about six years of age when Yuri held his hand, he decided that she was trying to show her feelings for him, if he carried that thought forward it would also include her actions now, with worrying about his diet, missing coming to her shop for breakfast, choosing a shop near where she knew he worked, not saying anything about having a runaway girl living with him, worrying about him and the girls, and coming to visit often, he is also worrying about what the girls are feeling about him, is it more than friendship or family, is it liking in a different way, wanting to be closer than related family, more like lovers.
第45話 未遂とJKへの応援コメント
Kanade was shy about the kissing scene, not because Kazuki was there but because she was wondering what a kiss with a lover would be like, and also thing about her feelings for Kazuki, Himari interrupted her just as she was about say something flirty to him. Or maybe it was another question like before about Yuri and his relationship.
第44話 告白とJKへの応援コメント
Himari has finally admitted to someone else that she has someone she likes, and she was thinking about Kazuki.The confession scene was heartwarming.
第43話 初料理とJKへの応援コメント
Himari is trying to catch a heart, Kazuki you need to look out!
第14話 決意とJKへの応援コメント
Himari is trying to make plans so she can be self sufficient in the future. Kanade is acting in a helpful way to her.
第13話 気を遣うJKへの応援コメント
while trying to help Himari caused trouble for Kazuki and she upset Kanade when she asked if she could wash her back instead, she is naturally to cute.
第12話 皿洗いとJKへの応援コメント
Kazuki finally started to get through to Kanade that it was alright for her to stay with him, she was his cousin, it wasn't her fault that she was left alone by her mother. Kanade had felt guilty about intruding on him. Himari had spent time on Kazuki's PC for most of the evening, than at bedtime the two girls laid down in their new futons and talked a bit, Himari asked Kanade how Kazuki was when he was younger, Kanade said she didn't really remember as she hadn't seen that much of him, than Himari talked about how she felt about him, this caused Kanade to fell a little jealous as she started playing what if in her head, if she wasn't related would she be treated the same as Himari, not knowing, that he was trying to treat them equal to the best of his ability in respect to their respective situations.
第11話 パソコンとJKへの応援コメント
Kazuki was more troubled by what Himari saw than she was, it was her questions that really bothered both of them, there are things she has said and asked that suggests that she is curious about sexual activities especially if Kazuki is involved, does she have a crush on him because he helped her, she is very cute ,she acts more naive than she actually is, because of the type of manga she likes to draw.
第10話 買い物とJK②への応援コメント
so Himari is into drawing, I was wondering as for some reason it wasn't translated before, I wonder if Kanade is trying to hide her feelings from Kazuki or is she just being careful around him as she doesn't really know him, and also her mother who she's lived with all her life left her alone so she might just be untrustful of adults right now, but she gives Himari a lot of leeway, that might be because she is the same age and has had some trouble.
第9話 買い物とJK①への応援コメント
they seemed to enjoy shopping, surprised Kanade didn't say anything about Kazuki looking at Himari's new underwear, Kanade made fun of Himari putting to hot of food in her mouth, than she did the same thing.
第6話 就寝前のJKへの応援コメント
a little lucky lewd, some misconceptions, things to do,getting along, needs to be met, expectations to meet, learning to live together like a "family", maybe?
第5話 要望を言うJKへの応援コメント
Kazuki is getting lesson #101 in house cleaning for living with young Ladies (WOMEN), he is going to be getting a masters degree in a lot of subjects dealing with living with the opposite sex for quite a while to come,like a clean bath and plenty of hot water is a must, snacks for guests, big fluffy towels for the bath, did I say lots and lots of big fluffy towels.
第4話 2人のJKへの応援コメント
Kanade also felt like she couldn't let Himari go back out on the street, so she used the excuse that she was uncomfortable living with Kazuki by herself, as she had never lived with a man before, to invite Himari to stay, on her own, Kazuki reluctantly went along with her, he wouldn't put Kanade in a similar setting so he had to go with her.
第79話 会話とJKへの応援コメント
これは機械翻訳のおかげです
作者のtwitterでweb版の展開が違うって言ってたの見てました
白虎院さんで気持ちをぶつけられると同時に、美実さんが相手への思いや、相手を探しているときのもがきをきちんと語ってくれたら、この章はもっと胸に刺さると思います。
剣道の勝負と同時に,言葉がぶつかり合い。個人的には、このドラマの醍醐味は二人の心と体のぶつかり合い、つまり二人の気持ちを同時に表現することだと思っています。
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翻訳まで使ってコメントありがとうございます。
美実さんには桜花の気持ちを『受け止める』役に専念してもらうため、このような表現になりました。
和輝と両親とは別の立ち位置の『大人』として出しているので(彼女もまだ若いのですが……)美実さんの葛藤はあえて省いた形になっております。
第77話 対話とJK②への応援コメント
更新お疲れ様です。
奏音ちゃんもしっかりと成長してるって事ですね。
第74話 帰宅とJKへの応援コメント
文庫から来ました。
web版の展開、楽しみにしています!
第74話 帰宅とJKへの応援コメント
更新お疲れ様です。
以前はこんな展開無かったはず…Web展開ですね!楽しみにしてます。
第70話 お祝いと俺への応援コメント
更新お疲れ様です。
手術!?お大事にしてください。まずは、健康第一で!無理せずお身体第一で。
第70話 お祝いと俺への応援コメント
福山陽士先生の描く平和な日常の風景が安心感あって好きです!
手術がんばってえらい(>_<)おだいじに!
第61話 玉葱とJKへの応援コメント
焼肉のタレ最強!
香味ペーストも最強!
第60話 帰宅とJKへの応援コメント
更新きたー!
めちゃくちゃ楽しみにしてたからうれしい😆
奏音視点はは駒村とひまりを二人きりにさせたくないと思うから、先お風呂に入っててって言われたの疎外感を感じてそう。
第30話 目玉焼きとJKへの応援コメント
一巻読み終わりました。
リワードも必要かなと、丁度一巻分、目を通しています。
二巻も楽しみにしています。
ありがとうございました。
作者からの返信
なんと……。リワードまで気を使っていただきありがとうございます…🙇
少しでも楽しんでいただけたなら幸いです。
2巻もどうぞよろしくお願いいたします!
第26話 風邪とJKへの応援コメント
カゼの時、食欲がない場合は、「無理して食べない方がいい」そうですね。「風邪に立ちむかうリソースを、消化に使ってしまう」からだそうで。
水だけでいいそうです。
第44話 告白とJKへの応援コメント
高塔君、前のストーカー的な奴と共謀してたわけでもなく、
その時の対応も良くてかなり好印象です。
こういった作品だとヒロイン候補(ハーレムかそうじゃないかも含めて)
の動向ってかなり重要だと思ってるので、作品としての流れは
間違いないとは思いますけど、高塔君にも幸せになって欲しいなあ。
せめて今後に高塔君のその後もあったら良いなと思いました。
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そう、高塔は良い奴なのです。気にかけてくださってありがとうございます。
今後掬い上げてあげられたらなと考えています。
第17話 ブレイクタイムとJKへの応援コメント
>「私は……さ、砂糖4個とガムシロで……!」
甘味料被ってる!
第50話 幼馴染みと俺②への応援コメント
更新お疲れ様です。
ついに告白が出ましたね😄
読んでるこっちまでドキドキするような告白で良かったです👍
次の更新も楽しみにしてます。
作者からの返信
告白きてしまいました…!
ありがとうございます!
第44話 告白とJKへの応援コメント
今回の話で初めてひまりがウザイと思った
(鈍感すぎてええ子や)
意思が弱すぎてそのうち寝取られそう
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自分の恋に盲目すぎて、向けられる矢印には鈍いひまりなのでした…
第77話 対話とJK②への応援コメント
かず兄、よく察したね
1つ屋根の下で暮らすってやっぱりすごいね