An excellent story
- ★★★ Excellent!!!
I loved your novel. But I also have some questions:
why have those 3 girls done anything yet? They could confess their feelings a lot of times but didn't do that. I perfectly understand that you are planning to make a great story. If I was there I would confess my feelings immediately! "Abel" is a great person. He's a "S" rare ranked person. In my opinion girls must fight for him. Not even adventure girls but also noble girls.
Thank you for understanding my personal opinion and I'm waiting to read new chapters.