An excellent story
- ★★★ Excellent!!!
I loved your novel. But I also have some questions:
why have those 3 girls done anything yet? They could confess their feelings a lot of times but didn't do that. I perfectly understand that you are planning to make a great story. If I was there I would confess my feelings immediately! "Abel" is a great person. He's a "S" rare rank person. In my opinion girls must fight for him. Not even adventure girls but also a noble girls.
Thank you for understanding my personal opinion and I'm waiting to read new chapters.