A bit of dissapointment

Chapter 3 was a big dissapointment. The story progress wasn't natural. The author 'forced' his desirer and delusion to the character making the story progress had hole sudden jumped, for example the mc was like a baby with a nuclear switch at his hand, not understanding how used it, suddenly became like a wiseman challenging the boss dungeon. F*ck you author, this story was about mc, not you. So stop forcing your fancy to the story and ruined your own created mc character. That was really st*pid of you.
This story has a good setting,story, and character; as long as the author make story plot flow natural, not jumping up or down as he liked, resulted on destruction of his own work!