おう…まじかよ…避妊は大事…うん

女の友情何て儚いもんだな…

俺の学生時代にはいなかった人種だからよく分かんないんだけど橋本ってかっこいいのかこれ？
田舎のやんちゃ学校だったから周り穴兄弟ばっかだったし、気に食わなきゃ物理だったから陰湿な奴って存在しなかったんだよね
顔だけの中身腐ってる奴とか物理的な教育的指導ですぐ学校辞めてっちゃうし
あまりにも違いすぎてジェネレーションギャップですわよ

そりゃ…
若くてお綺麗なナイスバデーのお母様達から直接ご指導を受けてるんだから…
その下位機種の娘たち相手には達観出来ますわな(笑)
そして修羅場へ？(笑)

Rino and Yuna are bewildered and befuddled by the same man as are their mother's, Yuna let out some of her feelings in front of her mother, both mother's sense their daughters changing feelings toward men, they just don't realise it is the same man that they like. cute, it's getting intense, very interesting.

second time same pattern as before, Kenichi is a push over for mature women, that guy should learn after meeting Kenichi twice, but I bet he won't!

Is that Nasuko who is being hit on? her daughter wanted to talk to him earlier and he turned her down, had she changed her mind about Kenichi like Rino did, it's getting very interesting, what will happen when the four ladies meet?

Natsuko Hiiragi is the mother of the Ms. Hiiragi that Kenichi helped, another single mother, Natsuko and Ayane talking is cute, Natsuko is jealous that Ayane has found a young man to liven up her life, when will Natsuko meet Kenichi ?

Who's Ayane's old friend ? Hiiragi was shaken by what happened to her , that shouldn't have happened but she was more shocked when Kenichi walked away when she got feisty with him, she thought he would interact with her like any other man who wanted something from her. Thanks for the story, it's flowing good, and is very true to real life.

Rino is starting to understand the meaning of what her mother wrights, her attitude is changing to men especially one man, she even forgot to change clothes because she was fantasizing to much, Ayane had just been with the same man Rino was dreaming of, that's why her legs were shaking so bad that Rino noticed. Thanks, it's a cute and interesting story.

Rino is so cute wondering about the changed Kenichi, and what she feels toward him, what would she think if she knew he was sex friends with her mother. Kenichi is caught up in a world of him and Ayane, so he's having trouble thinking of anything else, interesting tanks for the story.

did Rino accept Kenichi's offer because she feels he has no ulterior motives after he caught her when she tripped over him, combined with her reactions to the questions her mother asked about a boy she was thinking about and the way she's acting towards Kenichi, could she be having second thoughts about turning him down before, thanks very cute and interesting.

Ayane is most likely to be in her mid to upper thirties, did they go to a love hotel, Ayane is getting carried away, what's her daughter going to think, so cute, thanks

Rino will look at Kenichi with different eyes after he helped her and didn't want to get closer to her, it would be shocking if Rino, Ayane and Kenichi ended up at the same pastry shop. thanks it's very cute and interesting

Ayane is having feelings awaken towards Kenichi that she has left in her books since her husband died, is it from the emotions of being saved by him, or could it be a true emotion, the fact that Kenichi lied and said he was twenty five instead of his real age of sixteen, because it will make her believe he is older and a relationship will be easier to have, if she knew he was her daughters age she probably wouldn't think of it. it's a cute predicament, thanks, very interesting

they meet again, will Ayane invite Kenichi up to meet Rino, or just try to get his name ? Kenichi don't forget the soy sauce! cute, & interesting.

So Ganko-sensei is Rino's mom and she is the one Kenichi saved, she's using the experience to strengthen her novel. evidently she gets really worked up when she wrights.

is ms. Uchida related to the woman he saved? Yuuto seems to want Kenichi to be with his sister Yuri.

another female stunned by the hero who leaves without leaving his name!

lol thanks Author, good twist

Sorry but if a fool like that Hashimoto keeps messing around like that in real life then no matter what "ranking" he could belong to, the next thing he'll see would be a fist closing in into his face. Politeness has a limit, cross that line and be ready for the impact

That women can't beat men it's something old. Nowadays women are more scarier than men: a female classmate of mine send several punks to the hospital with broken bones and all, she was walking home around 10pm when they approached her to harass her and she beat the soul out of them. Seems like a joke but it did happen lol

No, even if the person is dressed in a provocative way that doesn't imply that they can and should be harassed. That we male will look more, that's a true but if anything beyond that is carried then you should, as a human being, lend a helping hand and intervene right away. It's OK to have prejudice towards certain kind of people but you should never overlook things that must be taken action against

It's actually silly, not to say brainless, to lie about your age.
Although understandable that he did it so she wouldn't take him lightly, that lie will come to eat you back when you would want to progress with her.
Besides, the fact that you looks older doesn't mean that you have the life experience that someone older (not always the case, but still) would normally have

ダブル親子丼くるのかな？

顔は一次予選
スペックが二次予選
それらを突破しない限りスタートラインにすら立つ権利は与えられない。

え、おもろい

ワイの幼馴染みに主人公と似たやつおったな、これは親子やけど、
幼馴染みは、三姉妹やったからなーしかも親公認の、まじ、なんのエロゲって、なったわ、

続き気になる〜

とりあえず終わったなら連載中じゃなくて完結済にして欲しい。普通に紛らわしい

面白くて一気読みさせていただきました
清々しいほどのオチで最後まで笑えましたけど、いくつか問題が

・各話で読者のコメに書かれていますが、表記ブレや誤字率が酷かった
・にもかかわらず修正なし
・「翌日」などの表記ではなく「明日」などの、読者によっては混乱するような表記をしている

読者からの誤字脱字報告は「その作品が好きだからもっと良くなってほしい！」という想いが込められたものだと思うので、しっかりと目を通すようにした方が良いと思います

最後になりましたが、連載お疲れ様でした＆長文失礼しました

誤字報告
×工藤健一
○工藤憲一

最高笑笑
後日談期待したい、、

え？終わったん！？

面白いからまだ読みたかった❗️

終わったwww

完………じゃねぇよ！！www
そりゃ絶対勝つよなー、だって避妊しないでヤリまくってたらそりゃあ、ねぇ？デキるもん。
ラブコメらしくないドロドロだと思ってたら、まさか最後にコメディをぶち込んでくるとは。タイトル回収も鮮やかだし。

なにはともあれ、連載お疲れ様でした！

ん？「完」ってもしかして憲一の人生………

終わり?

これはこれであり。面白かったです。

もうちっとだけ続くんじゃ(希望)w

おめでとう~璃乃と優奈にはもうすぐ弟と妹がいます。はっはっはっ！！
え？続編希望します！！

良い終わりでした
面白かったです

終わった…だと？

すっぱり終わって草
ナイス完結

わっはっはっはっはっは！



え？これで終わり？物足りないんですが…続編希望します！


読み返したけどまじでおもろいな笑笑笑笑笑笑
続き出せたりしませんか？

続編お願いします、絶対お願いしますm(_ _)m

まさか避妊していなかったとは…
逃がす気ないし(笑)

お疲れ様でした。
面白かったです。

完とは書いてあるけど、完結済みの表記にはなってないんだよね。母親が妊娠したとして、それで黙ったままでいる娘たちとは思いませんが。どうなるんですかね。

子供出来ちゃってたの？(;ﾟﾛﾟ);ﾟﾛﾟ);ﾟﾛﾟ)!!

続きは…

え、、、おわるの？

え！？終わるのまだ続いて欲しかったのだが…

凄まじいカオスっぷりｗ

なんかがっかり😞

((((；ﾟДﾟ))))

わはははは

「お母さん……うん。お母さんの官能小説、すごく良くて、一作あたり最低でも３０週はするの」
⇒
「お母さん……うん。お母さんの官能小説、すごく良くて、一作あたり最低でも３０周はするの」
週は周じゃないでしょうか？

スタンガンwww

あらあらで済ませるのか

はたしてマゼンダママはどんな反応を見せるだろうか笑笑笑笑笑笑笑笑笑笑笑笑

毎話マゼンタがあるせいで、それにしか目が行かなくなってきた笑

ヤンママ達・・・ www

いやさすがにこれは

葛藤なし考えなしは流石にないです。周りの奴以上にクズじゃん。
惚れた弱みでなんやかんや許されるとかそんな話にならないことを祈ります。

優奈 1 - 璃乃 0

あらまあ、
ただまあ、片方ならセーフなんだよなあ。

いいねー

なんかがっかり

あーあ堕落しましたね

わっはっはっは
母親たちの反応が楽しみだぜ！

ゲスい奴にクラスチェンジしたかー

短い友情だったww

おーのー

なんてこった！

おっと、親子丼のご注文かな？

刺されて欲しいとは思わんがもっと修羅場はちょうだいw

早すぎでしょ(´^ω^｀)ﾌﾞﾌｫwww

相手は孔明と司馬懿かな？w

爆笑

カオスだｗ

それが お母さんチームの狙いだったりして

某誠くんルート歩んでるな

はやすぎやろ笑

明後日の朝

↑冒頭部分ですが明後日という言い方は少し変かなと思います。

バレた翌々日の朝
など、いつから二日進んだ日の朝なのかを付け足すといいと思います

人の修羅場は美味しいねwww

あっはっはっはwwwww

南無三

一箇所いつぃものになっております

２ヶ所ほど堪能小説になっております

この子達は分かっているのか？
例え勝利したとしても自分の後ろには母が居る事に・・・

JK VS 熱女

皆頑張って憲一はまた修羅場に巻き込まれてほしい
作者さんにはぜひとも憲一くんに修羅場という最高の場の提供を！

若いからと言ってね、作品名からして勝てるとは思えないｗ

とうとうバレて二人が結託しましたね。これから囲い込みが始まって気が付いた時には逃げられなくなるんだろうなあ。

ｗｗｗ

一気にバレたのね(笑)

笑ってる場合じゃねえぞ作者

畜生！これがエロメインなら全員美味しくの主人公一人勝ちルートなのに！

高校生でも全然いいってwww

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