For my little opinion. I think you could focus more detail on how the main character get used to the pain and death like Re:ゼロから始める異世界生活. Even he can keep RE but he still can feel he's bones being crush or he's guts and pieces spread all over the place . This endless pain can break his mind. I think it's a good point to make main character more specific.
For my little opinion.
I think you could focus more detail on how the main character get used to the pain and death like Re:ゼロから始める異世界生活.
Even he can keep RE but he still can feel he's bones being crush or he's guts and pieces spread all over the place .
This endless pain can break his mind.
I think it's a good point to make main character more specific.