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  • Both are good, ! has more details of the area around the sister's home, 2 is more about the interactions between the four of them, and is better about the information on the back ground relations and hints at romance.

    どちらも良いですが、1では姉の家周辺の詳細が描かれ、2では4人の交流が描かれ、背景関係の情報や恋愛のヒントがより充実しています。
    Dochira mo yoidesuga, 1de wa ane no ie shūhen no shōsai ga egaka re, 2de wa 4-ri no kōryū ga egaka re, haikei kankei no jōhō ya ren'ai no hinto ga yori jūjitsu shite imasu.

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    Thank you for reading the work I wrote. I'm very happy to say that both are good! You told me that both were good, but which one was better for you? Please edit the comments and let me know.