第7話【第二章】への応援コメント
The two girls at first were acting out because they didn't believe Hiiragiya was going to take them to his home, and when they got to his house they were very surprised at the size and the richness of his house, it was stunning to them how he was living. Thanks for the story, I'll see you at the next update.
第6話への応援コメント
Hiiragiya was able to declare that Miya and Maya were his sisters to Detective Takuo Iwaasa, which was what he wanted, so that he could take care of them, hopefully Maya's involvement in the fight against the riot police won't hurt them when he takes the girls home with him. Hiiragiya doesn't know why he cares about Miya and Maya, but he does care about them quite a lot Miya is young maybe around 5th to 7th grade and she's very smart and needs to be going to school, Maya is probably early high school in age, and she feels like she wouldn't fit in with the so called normal kids at school, but she could be surprised. For a shut in Hiiragiya is actually doing fairly well at communicating at this time, and he hasn't frozen up yet.
作者からの返信
Thanks for the nice comment!
I'm glad because what I want to say is seems to be understood.
As a writer of this novel, I need to think about the speed. In this situation, there are many things I want to say , but it is not a good way to say many things suddenly.
So, I have to choose the places where each information should be connected.
It is a not easy way , but I want to try because I want study about myself.
第4話への応援コメント
こんにちは。
読み返しに来ましたよ。
摩耶ちゃん、口は悪いけど根はやさしくて良い子そうですね。
こういうキャラは自分好きですよ。
後、妹ちゃんも妙にキャラが立っていていい感じですね。
お互いに執筆頑張りましょう。
作者からの返信
コメントありがとうございます！
やっぱり自作を、特にキャラクターを好いていただけると嬉しいものですね(´；ω；`)ｳｩｩ
ただこの拙作、我ながら気に入っておりませんで……。
正確には、モチベーションの問題で上手く書けていない、という状況ですね。
これは、「もしよろしければ」という大前提に基づくお願いですけれども。
第1話～第4話の時点でのご感想など頂戴できますでしょうか？
自分でも、何が何だか分からないんですよね。どうしてここまで没個性的で魅力に欠けるのか……。
もしご感想を頂戴できる場合は、どこに書き込んでいただいても問題ございません。
近況ノートでも応援コメントでも。
厚かましいことを承知でこの駄文を綴っておりますが、ご一考いただけると大変光栄です<(_ _)>
第1話【第一章】への応援コメント
sounds like an alcoholic, dumped by his parents, with to much financial support.
作者からの返信
Thanks for giving me a comment about the novel!
Through this novel, I want to describe young people who fight against terrible adults and destiny.
I'm very glad because my novel is read by jim-1950 san !
Thank you very much!(＾ω＾)
第21話への応援コメント
祭りだから。。。屋台的なことかな？！
作者からの返信
どうもです。一応筆者としては「射撃の屋台」を想像しております（笑）