I don't know if I should write possible improvements in the review or in supportive comments but I will just place it here just to be safe.
The story is short and simple but its flow is a bit vague. Chapter 1-6 are related to a degree but the other chapters are just a bit different from the original story.
Anyway, I can't wait for more works and see how you push your creativity ٩(◕‿◕｡)۶
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@Razumikhin様
Thank you for your comments and reviews!m(_ _)m
This was my first time writing a script for ASMR, and even though it was a little different than usual and I had a hard time, I really enjoyed it (^^)
I don't know if I should write possible improvements in the review or in supportive comments but I will just place it here just to be safe.
The story is short and simple but its flow is a bit vague. Chapter 1-6 are related to a degree but the other chapters are just a bit different from the original story.
Anyway, I can't wait for more works and see how you push your creativity ٩(◕‿◕｡)۶
作者からの返信
@Razumikhin様
Thank you for your comments and reviews!m(_ _)m
This was my first time writing a script for ASMR, and even though it was a little different than usual and I had a hard time, I really enjoyed it (^^)