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  • サンオイルだと小麦色の肌になるんですけど、ビキニで日焼けは日焼け跡がくっきり残ってエッチになっちゃいますね。

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    みどりの様。アキノリです。
    またも感想有難う御座います。
    執筆が忙しいと思われる中で感謝です。
    あと.....熱中症に気を付けて。
    大変暑いので。

    サンオイル.....そうですねぇ。日焼けで.....まさにエッチになっちゃいますよねぇ.....は!
    陽毬は.....それが目的で!!!!?(鼻血)
    めっちゃエロい.....。(語彙力消滅)

    まあとにかくこの先もご覧下されば嬉しいです。
    何時もお世話になっております。
    感謝致します。
    本当に有難う御座います。( ・∇・)
    願わくば最後までお付き合い頂ければ嬉しいです。

    アキノリ

  • Himari and Nagare are using the excuse of having Shun put suntan oil on their backs as a way to get him to touch them and tease him, and make him think about them, but right now Shun is only Nagare, Himari is at a disadvantage as she doesn't live with him like Nagare does.The flirty scenes of the girls are cute and Shun is so shy and bashful, even though he has been dating Nagare for a couple of years, thanks for the update see you on the next one.

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    thank you always. Thank you very much for your feedback. Thank you. Dear Jim-1950. Be careful of heat stroke. But yes. It is very sensible to think it that way. You're shy. She looks cute. But that is certainly true. There is a slight difference, so I would like you to do your best in that area. to girls. I can only support you, but I want you to do your best. And Shun is the same, but I really envy him, so I want Shun to die somehow. just kidding. I would be happy if you read this ahead.

    akinori