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第21話(超絶改稿)周りへの信頼を取り戻した流(下)」への応援コメント

  • Being abused in elementary school and then her father abandoned her by committing suicide, she felt that the fact that she was molested was the reason her father killed himself, if only she had been stronger or did something different so that she wasn't molested than her father would still be alive>she can't get over the self guilt she feels, and keeps blaming herself for everything bad that is happening around her, even her mother remarrying so she could have a father. Shun is trying to show her how to look at things differently, but he has only partly succeeded. Thanks for the update, take your time, I'm sure you are busy in RL, make sure to get plenty of rest.

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    thank you always. Thank you again for your feedback. Sorry for the late reply. I'd like to write a reply, but I'm sorry that I can't find the right time. As long as you are very happy to analyze it. I think it was good to write every time. It's another novel, but thank you for following me. And thank you for your review. I'll have a look at your well-written review later. I'm Japanese, so I'm not good at reading English, but I'll try to translate it somehow. I don't know if all your sentences can be translated and it's correct. But I'll do my best.

    thank you for your hard work

    akinori

  • 年齢を計算すると二人が13歳の時?
    13歳の女の子が「これまで出会った男はみんな獣でした.....そして裏切りもあった」というような経験を積むのはどんな環境にいたのか気になりますね。

    作者からの返信

    みどりの様。アキノリです。
    この度は.....すいません。
    立て続けにお返事書きました。
    お疲れ様です。

    そうですね。
    13歳もしくは12歳の時です。
    今の日本の虐待の部分を表現しました。
    実際.....そういうのがリアルで起こっているので皆さんに知ってほしいですね。
    獣だった.....、ですがまあちょっと極端な表現だったかもですが。
    それだけ妬んでいるという事を知ってほしかったのでその表現にしました。
    環境は歪んでいる感じですが。
    いつかは修正出来るでしょうと信じています。

    この度も有難う御座います。( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

    アキノリ