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  • 親の姿も出てきて三人の絆も強くなってきた。
    結構まともそうなお父さんだけどなぜ毬はあんなふうになっちゃったのか。

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    みどりの様。アキノリです。
    いつも拝読してくれて感謝致します。
    それからたまにのご指摘にも感謝しかございません。
    応援に感謝致します。

    そうですね。
    3人の絆が何処まで深まるか.....それが見ものですね。
    果たしてそれが良い方向に転ぶか悪い方向に転ぶかは分かりませんが。
    でもきっと良い道は開けると思います。

    そんな敵の鞠の過去は後程に設定しますがまだ出てきません。
    鞠は.....鞠なりの痛みがある様ですけどね。
    だからと言って許す訳にはいかないでしょうけど。

    この度もご感想誠に有難う御座います。٩( 'ω' )و
    感謝致します。

    アキノリ

  • Nagare and Shun are going to stay overnight at Himari's house, when Shun returned with luggage for the sleepover, Nagare was sitting on the couch blushing and smiling, while Shun was gone Himari and Nagare must have been talking about him and their feelings for him. THANKs for the update, it's very interesting.

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    I am always grateful for your help. Thank you very much for your feedback. Now. Isn't it? I don't know how much of a maiden's secret she keeps a secret, but I'm jealous of Shun. It's not a problem that I can manage to stay overnight, but I think I should stay for now. That's why I stayed this time. But anyway, I'm a little jealous of Shun, so I'd like her to leave a little space..... Kidding aside. It's my job to update, so I'll let you update slowly. I think maybe the translation is wrong, but I didn't know if it was very funny or interesting. But no matter how you look at it, you've been supporting me all this time, and it won't change. I feel what you desperately want to convey. Be sure to write all the way to the end. Thank you.

    akinori