この話の中で「愛人」と書いてある部分は高校生だと「恋人」の方が一般的な気がします。
語感の問題なので参考までに。
作者からの返信
みどりの様。立て続けに申し訳ありません。
失礼します。アキノリです。
そうですね.....取り敢えずその部分は改稿しようかと思います。
何だか確かにおかしい気がしますので。
今はちょっと手が回らなくなってきているので後程に改稿します。
何時もご指摘、誠に有難う御座います。
体調を崩されない様にお過ごし下さい。
コロナが流行り始めたみたいなので。
有難う御座います。
それから.....参考にします。
感謝します。
アキノリ
In front of Shun, Nagare challenged Himare to a duel to see who could win Shun's heart, she called herself an ex-girlfriend at the time.Thanks, the story is interesting, enjoyable and very fun, the interaction between Nagare and Himari is so cute, <if I'm using the right word Nagare is being very "Tsundere".
作者からの返信
Thank you very much. Thank you very much for using your precious time and I am very sorry for the comments here and there. Well, are you a tsundere? It's good. That expression is nice. Certainly, the flow is based on the tsundere motif. It's great that you know tsundere. I like tsundere too. I don't care what you like. Thank you very much for your support. And you say that it's fun and fun, and I'm ashamed behind my computer screen. I strongly felt that even such a small novel can make you smile. It seems that you are reading other novels as well. I'm a little embarrassed. Please understand that you may not be satisfied. Just because I'm immature. Now. What will happen after applying for a duel? If you look at it, there is no happiness that beats it. Thank you. Thank you for your continuous support. It makes me happy to feel connected to the world.
akinori