彼は思わず唇を固く結んで、あたかも自尊心を傷けられた人のような眼を彼の周囲に向けた。けれども彼の心のうちに何事が起こりつつあるかをまるで知らない車中の乗客は、彼の眼遣いに対して少しの注意も払わなかった。

He hardly close lip with no consciousness, it direct around to like person was injure pride of eyes. However, the passenger in train, who don't know what happening him mind, don't be careful a little his eyes.

添削

"He involuntarily pursed his lips and directed a gaze around him as if he were a person whose pride had been wounded. However, the passenger in the train, who had no idea what was going on in his mind, did not pay the slightest bit of attention to his gaze."

"He involuntarily tightened his lips and directed a gaze around him as if he were a person whose self-esteem had been wounded. However, the passengers in the train, completely unaware of what was happening inside him, did not pay the slightest attention to his gaze."

彼の頭は彼の乗っている電車のように、自分自身の軌道の上を走って前へ進むだけであった。彼は二、三日前ある友達から聞いたボアンカレーの話を思い出した。彼のために「偶然」の意味を説明してくれたその友達は彼に向かってこういった。

His head advance in front of track his-self as if train was taken hem. He remember story of Boankare to hear from him friend a two, three days ago. Hem friend who explain meaning of "coincidence", say to him.

添削

"His mind was like the train he was riding on, moving forward only on its own tracks. He remembered a story about Boankare that he had heard from a friend two or three days ago. The friend who had explained the meaning of "coincidence" to him said to him."

"His mind was like the train he was on, moving forward only on its own tracks. He recalled a story about Boankare that he had heard from a friend two or three days ago. The friend who had explained the meaning of "coincidence" to him said to him."