「この肉体はいつ何時どんな変に会わないとも限らない。それどころか、今現にどんな変がこの肉体のうちに起こりつつあるかも知れない。そうして自分は全く知らずにいる。恐ろしい事だ。」

“If my body was met some things whenever, in addition, now if some change take place in my body. and I don't know all that. It is horrible”

添削

"This body may encounter strange things at any time, and what's more, even now there may be some changes happening within it that I am completely unaware of. It's a frightening thought."

"This body is not limited to encountering any strange changes at any time. Moreover, there may be changes occurring in this body right now that I am unaware of. And yet, I remain completely ignorant of them. It's a terrifying thing."

此所まで働いて来た彼の頭はそこで留まる事が出来なかった。どっと後から突き落とすような勢で、彼を前の方に押し遣った。突然彼は心の中で叫んだ。

until now working he head don't have stayed that. He was thrown forward to pushed like power from behind. Suddenly he shouted in him mind.

添削

"His mind, which had been working up until this point, could not stay there. With a sudden force that pushed him from behind, he was thrown forward. He cried out in his mind."

"His mind, which had been working until this point, couldn't stay there. Suddenly, with a force that pushed him from behind as if he were being thrown down, he was pushed forward. And then, he cried out in his mind."

「精神界も同じ事だ。精神界も全く同じことだ。何時どう変わるか分からない。そうしてその変わるところを己は見たのだ」

It is same as well inner space. inner space is completely same. whenever I don' know how change. so that I see that change moment.

添削

"The same applies to the spiritual realm. It's exactly the same. You don't know when or how it will change, and yet I have seen those moments of change."

"The same goes for the spiritual realm. It's completely the same. You don't know when or how it will change, and yet I have witnessed those moments of change."