　彼は不愉快になった。急に気を換えて自分の周囲を眺めた。周囲のものは彼の存在にすら気が付かずにみんな澄ましていた。彼はまた考えつづけた。

He got disagreeable. He look out about himself to change suddenly him feelings. About people hade nothing to don't notice the existence of he. He is thinking again.

添削

He became unpleasant. Suddenly changing his mood, he looked around at his surroundings. Everything and everyone around him seemed serene and undisturbed by his presence. He continued to ponder.

He became unhappy. Suddenly changing his mind, he looked around his surroundings. The things around him were all calm and without noticing his presence. He continued to ponder."

「どうしてあんな苦しい目に会ったんだろう」

“What do I meet such hard time”

添削

"Why did I have to go through such a difficult experience?"

Why did I have to go through such a painful experience?"

荒川堤へ花見に行った帰り途から何らの予告なしに突発した当時の疼痛について、彼は全くの盲目漢であった。その原因はあらゆる想像の外にあった。不思議というよりもむしろ恐ろしかった。

He was not aware that the throbbing pain in those days to suddenly happen from Arakawatuzumi to see flower and my way home.

添削

"He was completely caught off guard by the sudden onset of pain that occurred on his way back from the cherry blossom viewing at the Arakawa embankment. The cause was beyond any imaginable explanation, and rather than being just strange, it was downright terrifying."

He was completely unaware of the throbbing pain that suddenly struck him on his way back from the cherry blossom viewing at the Arakawa embankment. The cause was beyond any imaginable explanation and rather than being just strange, it was downright terrifying."