ちゃんと自覚して
ちゃんと自分の言葉で振った。
男らしいぞ！
柚木ちゃんは可哀想だけど本心以外で振られたらそれこそトラウマものだろうし、
これしか結末は無かったんだろうね…
志摩くん勇気持ってふった 柚木ちゃん今日は泣きな
これで陽菜乃ちゃんとくっつかないと柚木ちゃんはもちろん俺らもおいってなるから頼むぞ
編集済
Yuzuki's confesion triggered Takayuki to review in his mind what he had seen and done since he had met Nana, and Hinano, he compared how his life was before he met them to how his life has been since he has known them, the conclusion he reached was that his life was much better, and as he looked at his relationship with Hinano, he came to realise that he was actually in love with her, he wondered why he hadn't realised it before. Takayuki had trouble speaking, but he managed to tell Yuzuki that he couldn't go out with her, and she guessed the rest that there was someone else he liked and that it was Hinano, when she mumbled it out he confirmed that it was so, Yuzuki said that she could accept that, and said good-bye, as she was walking away she started to cry, as she hadn't done in front of him as she didn't want to cause him more trouble by making him feel regretful for her. I'm looking forward to the confession of Takayuki to Hinano, the flashback scenes were refreshing and worked well in the plot of the story to give Takayuki a reason to turn down Yuzuki. Thanks for the story, I'll wait for the next update.
今日の志摩くんはカッコよかったですね。
(※回想での体育祭シーンは除く)
この結末でしたか……(^_^;)
つまりこの流れで行くと………f(^_^)
夢は夢通りに叶うのかな？
フィナーレがどうなるのか？楽しみにしています。(-.-)y-~
柚木は不憫だけど志摩が自覚するシーンは何度も読み返してしまうぐらい素晴らしい回でした。
柚木ちゃんに花火大会に誘われて無自覚に一緒に出かけた時からヤバいなぁと思っていたんだけど、妹ちゃんから的確な指摘を受けても気が付かずハラハラしていました。
柚木ちゃんの告白、告白を受けてから断るまでの二人の心象描写はとても優れた描き方で、二人の心を思うと恋愛成就してほしい、柚木ちゃんが傷つかないでいて欲しいとの気持ちが強くなってきました。しかし、陽菜乃ちゃんはどうなのよ、と思って読んでいくとちゃんと落とし所を間違わずに、柚木ちゃんの傷も浅く話をまとめていて、流石と思いました。
作者様の秀作の箇所でしたね❣️