I think this novel needs some detail in its time setting, I'm surprised the story has been going on for several months, it's kinda weird that they didn't have any contact on that months even though they're live in the same house, i think one week or two weeks is already enough for them to have no development.
But It's really interesting story even though it's basic genre about cohabitation with the premise of marriage in highschool life, i love episode 3 where the main character didn't help the girl when she cry even though he see her and just back to home. but in the end he make rice for her and leave it with a note and got a reply in the morning. IT'S really great turning point for their relationship and it's feels original unlike other novels with similar genre. (making the main character not unseless in housework is great decision! I love it!)
Great job author-san! I'm sorry i leave a comment in English, i read the novel with the help of google translate-san, it's interesting novel so I'm gonna follow it! I'm waiting for the continuation 🙏🙏😊
作者からの返信
Thank you for writing a comment. When it comes to setting the story, I'm completely lacking in skills. I'm sorry. We will continue to aim for further quality improvement so that we can meet everyone's expectations! Please look forward to it!
いつかと言わずに、
今直ぐに幸せにしてあげて下さい！
作者からの返信
それが出来たらいいんですけどねぇ笑
莉音くん頑張れ！！