Poor Anan-san, the teacher is putting pressure on her to get sexual favor's, and she can't make him stop, she thought that Harada-san was the same, as he got sick because he let her ride the school bus, she felt like she had to let him do what ever he wanted with her body, she was shocked when she found out that he was different than she thought, he was the first boy that didn't have ulterior motives she had met, because of poor self esteem and shyness, she was an easy target for predators, she didn't like being used, she ended up shaking and afraid of what was going to happen to her. she found that that didn't happen with Harada-kun, she felt like she could really like him, and the way he was watching her all the time, he liked her but felt to immature to approach her, as she appeared really grown up to him. His friends were afraid of him being around, as they felt like they were going to loose a gaming partner, 'they might have known something of what was happening around her also. The story is short, and it's a good read, interesting, entertaining, well thought out, and fun to read. It can stand alone or become a much longer play, in fact I would love to see it fleshed out, with more episodes as another story. Thanks for the hard work.
可哀想な阿南さん、先生は彼女に性的な接待をさせるよう圧力をかけているのに、止めさせることはできない、原田さんも同じだと思った、原田さんがスクールバスに乗せたせいで病気になったのだと彼女は思った、彼女は 彼が自分の体で望むことを何でもさせなければならないと感じた、彼が彼女が思っていたのと違っていたことを知ったとき、彼女はショックを受けた、彼は彼女が出会った最初の下心を持たない少年でした、なぜなら貧しいからです 自尊心と内気さから、彼女は捕食者の格好の標的となり、利用されるのが嫌いで、最終的には自分に何が起こるか怖くて震えていました。 原田くんにはそんなことは起こらなかった、彼女は原田くんのことを本当に好きになれる気がした、そして原田くんがずっと自分のことを見ていて、彼は彼女のことを好きだけど、彼女が本当に大人に見えたので、彼女に近づくのは未熟だと感じた 彼に。 彼の友人たちは、ゲームパートナーを失うのではないかと感じたため、彼がそばにいるのを恐れていました。 物語は短く、読み応えがあり、興味深く、面白く、よく考えられており、読むのが楽しいです。 それは単独でも、あるいはもっと長い劇になることもできます。実際、私はそれが別の物語としてより多くのエピソードを加えて肉付けされるのを見てみたいと思っています。 お疲れ様でした。 Kawaisōna Anami-san, sensei wa kanojo ni seitekina settai o sa seru yō atsuryoku o kakete iru no ni, tome saseru koto wa dekinai, Harada-san mo onajida to omotta, Harada-san ga sukūrubasu ni noseta sei de byōki ni natta noda to kanojo wa omotta, kanojo wa kare ga jibun no karada de nozomu koto o nandemo sa senakereba naranai to kanjita, kare ga kanojo ga omotte ita no to chigatte ita koto o shitta toki, kanojo wa shokku o uketa, kare wa kanojo ga deatta saisho no shitagokoro o motanai shōnendeshita, nazenara mazushīkaradesu jisonshin to uchiki-sa kara, kanojo wa hoshoku-sha no kakkō no hyōteki to nari, riyō sa reru no ga kiraide, saishūtekini wa jibun ni nani ga okoru ka kowakute furuete imashita. Harada-kun ni wa son'na koto wa okoranakatta, kanojo wa Harada-kun no koto o hontōni suki ni nareru ki ga shita, soshite Harada-kun ga zutto jibun no koto o mite ite, kare wa kanojo no koto o sukidakedo, kanojo ga hontōni otona ni mietanode, kanojo ni chikadzuku no wa mijukuda to kanjita kare ni. Kare no yūjin-tachi wa, gēmupātonā o ushinau node wanai ka to kanjita tame, kare ga soba ni iru no o osorete imashita. Monogatari wa mijikaku, yomigotae ga ari, kyōmibukaku, omoshiroku, yoku kangae rarete ori, yomu no ga tanoshīdesu. Sore wa tandoku demo, aruiwa motto nagai geki ni naru koto mo dekimasu. Jissai, watashi wa sore ga betsu no monogatari to shite yori ōku no episōdo o kuwaete nikudzuke sa reru no o mite mitai to omotte imasu. Otsukaresamadeshita.
クラスメイトの阿南さんは先生と……への応援コメント
Poor Anan-san, the teacher is putting pressure on her to get sexual favor's, and she can't make him stop, she thought that Harada-san was the same, as he got sick because he let her ride the school bus, she felt like she had to let him do what ever he wanted with her body, she was shocked when she found out that he was different than she thought, he was the first boy that didn't have ulterior motives she had met, because of poor self esteem and shyness, she was an easy target for predators, she didn't like being used, she ended up shaking and afraid of what was going to happen to her. she found that that didn't happen with Harada-kun, she felt like she could really like him, and the way he was watching her all the time, he liked her but felt to immature to approach her, as she appeared really grown up to him. His friends were afraid of him being around, as they felt like they were going to loose a gaming partner, 'they might have known something of what was happening around her also. The story is short, and it's a good read, interesting, entertaining, well thought out, and fun to read. It can stand alone or become a much longer play, in fact I would love to see it fleshed out, with more episodes as another story. Thanks for the hard work.
可哀想な阿南さん、先生は彼女に性的な接待をさせるよう圧力をかけているのに、止めさせることはできない、原田さんも同じだと思った、原田さんがスクールバスに乗せたせいで病気になったのだと彼女は思った、彼女は 彼が自分の体で望むことを何でもさせなければならないと感じた、彼が彼女が思っていたのと違っていたことを知ったとき、彼女はショックを受けた、彼は彼女が出会った最初の下心を持たない少年でした、なぜなら貧しいからです 自尊心と内気さから、彼女は捕食者の格好の標的となり、利用されるのが嫌いで、最終的には自分に何が起こるか怖くて震えていました。 原田くんにはそんなことは起こらなかった、彼女は原田くんのことを本当に好きになれる気がした、そして原田くんがずっと自分のことを見ていて、彼は彼女のことを好きだけど、彼女が本当に大人に見えたので、彼女に近づくのは未熟だと感じた 彼に。 彼の友人たちは、ゲームパートナーを失うのではないかと感じたため、彼がそばにいるのを恐れていました。 物語は短く、読み応えがあり、興味深く、面白く、よく考えられており、読むのが楽しいです。 それは単独でも、あるいはもっと長い劇になることもできます。実際、私はそれが別の物語としてより多くのエピソードを加えて肉付けされるのを見てみたいと思っています。 お疲れ様でした。
Kawaisōna Anami-san, sensei wa kanojo ni seitekina settai o sa seru yō atsuryoku o kakete iru no ni, tome saseru koto wa dekinai, Harada-san mo onajida to omotta, Harada-san ga sukūrubasu ni noseta sei de byōki ni natta noda to kanojo wa omotta, kanojo wa kare ga jibun no karada de nozomu koto o nandemo sa senakereba naranai to kanjita, kare ga kanojo ga omotte ita no to chigatte ita koto o shitta toki, kanojo wa shokku o uketa, kare wa kanojo ga deatta saisho no shitagokoro o motanai shōnendeshita, nazenara mazushīkaradesu jisonshin to uchiki-sa kara, kanojo wa hoshoku-sha no kakkō no hyōteki to nari, riyō sa reru no ga kiraide, saishūtekini wa jibun ni nani ga okoru ka kowakute furuete imashita. Harada-kun ni wa son'na koto wa okoranakatta, kanojo wa Harada-kun no koto o hontōni suki ni nareru ki ga shita, soshite Harada-kun ga zutto jibun no koto o mite ite, kare wa kanojo no koto o sukidakedo, kanojo ga hontōni otona ni mietanode, kanojo ni chikadzuku no wa mijukuda to kanjita kare ni. Kare no yūjin-tachi wa, gēmupātonā o ushinau node wanai ka to kanjita tame, kare ga soba ni iru no o osorete imashita. Monogatari wa mijikaku, yomigotae ga ari, kyōmibukaku, omoshiroku, yoku kangae rarete ori, yomu no ga tanoshīdesu. Sore wa tandoku demo, aruiwa motto nagai geki ni naru koto mo dekimasu. Jissai, watashi wa sore ga betsu no monogatari to shite yori ōku no episōdo o kuwaete nikudzuke sa reru no o mite mitai to omotte imasu. Otsukaresamadeshita.