good writing & well-organized plot

I am very impressed with this story, I started following since the novel has 200 chapters and continues to grow.

first I want to say thank you for an amazing novel

short review in my opinion: The storyline is neat and organized with unexpected plot twists, I also like how the author develops the characters in the story (like Finne who was originally just a beautiful woman but now has wisdom because she is always near Al)

another thing I like is how the author describes some events from the perspective of other characters which makes it easier to understand the plot and enter the story as a whole.

many terrible things happen but I like how everything is resolved not in a hurry and ends happily.

last but not least, I really hope you continue the "after" story where Al and all the characters live happily after their battle. I see that Al already has children in the future with Finne and Elna, it would be great to see their journey and how Al raises them as a father.

Thank you for the amazing story, you are great!!

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