二部楽しみにしてます

tis the start of the team up of Airi, Minase, and Kyoya, it must be the start of the new week, that Minase was talking about last episode, their still living separate, but I'm sure that it will change in the future. Thanks for an enjoyable and interesting story, I'm looking forward to the next part, I will keep checking back every month or so.

Minase answered hisperposal with a yes they are going to start dating and taking care of Airi together it might be a while before they get past a hand shake but the three of them will become a true family someday in the not to distant future.

Minase broke down crying on Kyoya's back, he had gotten the message to her that just like her cooking, being able to do everything a mother does takes time and practice.

now that Kyoya knows what Minase problem is he can talk to her about what he heard from his mom, normally a single mom relies on help from someone close to them.

Minase has overworked herself into a fever and exhaustion now she might need hospitalization. Airi quick get Kyoya!

it seems that Kyoya was just barely surviving, Airi was very happy to see him and wanted to go on a date with him, Kyoya looked at Minase, they both wanted to tell her no, but they also didn't want to break her little heart, then Minase got an unexpected phone call, her grandmother was in the hospital, now she's really in a pickle, what is she going to do? will she rely on Kyoya again or will she try to handle it herself.

Kyoya accepted his feelings let Minase know how he felt about her but she was so stubborn that she refused him, now she is ignoring him, how is Kyoya doing, who knows? have to wait till next time to find out if he is alright. how is Airi doing without seeing Kyoya, the answers will come out soon, thanks

trip to school = trip down memory lane, oh nostalgia oh to be there again, all the romance and history of the old school building, bring back memories of unrequited love, between Minase and Kyoya, how they watched each other from afar not realising that each had similar thoughts about the other. There won't be a better time to talk than now, let your feelings flow so you both can hear them, let them mix and grow and become strong enough to last a lifetime, thanks for the inspiring work.

both Minase and Kyoya are not truly facing each other or themselves by not admitting to themselves how much they have wanted to be together since high school and then talking to each other about their feelings, they are missing out on good opportunities as well as prime memory making time and maybe some step-siblings for Airi, witch she would love to be a big sister too. Minase and Kyoya get along so well that you might think they were already married, thanks for the hard work.

Saijo was trying to run the party and control the top girls for himself, but neither one liked it and tried to avoid him, first Utaha and than Minase sat down with Kyoya. Kyoya has a better personality than Saijo, he's less domineering, thinks more of the other person, less selfish, is more easy going, respects others, in general Kyoya is a better person,thanks.

Minase realised if she let go of Kyoya that she will end up alone, it was a premonition, and then she got a text from Utaha that Kyoya was going to be the only one at the party that Utaha was throwing, what should she do, thanks.

Ayana will not admit to herself that she is falling in love with Kyoya, and she knows he was lying about just wanting to help anyone in trouble especially a neighbor, thanks

Kyoya is caught in the middle of Minase and Haruno as they try to bluff each other as they are trying to decide how much interest the other one has in Kyoya, of course the clueless Kyoya knows that the two women have some sort of a disagreement going on involving him, he doesn't know that it involves how they feel about him, Minase is taking revenge out on Kyoya by pinching him under the table, Haruno is trying to get closer to him, which he doesn't want, Minase was pretending to herself that she didn't want his eyes on her, but when it appears that he doesn't really have feelings for her, she is acting jealous and disappointed, like a spoiled child, Haruno has been trying to get Kyoya to look at her as more than just a fellow employee, Kyoya is so dense that he doesn't even consider himself as a potential boyfriend or husband, although he tries to ignore the women's natural assets so that he doesn't get himself into trouble, he's always worried about appearing suspicious, or getting charged with sexual harassment, his attitude about himself is that he is the one to be charged if anything happens around him, he believes that he only gets along with people by lying or making false promises like has to do in his job, which is not what he likes to do, he has low self-esteem, he lets himself be pushed around just to stay liked by someone,if he can avoid conflict he will even if he has to out of his way, the story is interesting and enjoyable "google" doesn't always give a smooth translation, and that isn't the authors fault, in general the writing is smooth and easy to read, thanks for the story.

Minase was surprised when Kyoya came home with Haruno-chan (I was to), Minase had planned the perfect ambush, it got interrupted because there were 2 people not 1 person like she was expecting, did Haruno show up because Kyoya had been asking her strange questions at the office and she wanted to meet this neighbor who was asking these questions, getting into shuraba territory now what will the two women do, thanks for the intriguing story.

Utaha knows how Ayana feels about Kyoya, and from the stories Ayana tells about how Kyoya helps her she can get a feeling of how he feels about her, when Utaha asked Kyoya how he felt about Ayana in front of Airi it upset Airi that her Aya-chan would have feelings for the person she had feelings for, and she is the same age, noy 20 years younger, now Ayana is going back over all of her interactions with Kyoya looking for anything she missed about how he acted, she doesn't realize that her abrupt and curt tone of voice she's always puts him off as he don't understand what she's trying to get across to him, her words say one thing while her voice and facial expressions say something completely different, it's interesting thanks.

Minase was worried that Uhata had told Kyoya that she had liked him in high school and she still did, they had been talking for years it seems, did Airi get into trouble in the department store womens department because of underwear, Kyoya is dense and clueless that Minase likes him, but he was a loner all through school and into 2D images so he wasn't paying attention to his schoolmates, and he doesn't really know how to interact with anyone, does Minase want him to make the first move, Thanks I'll keep looking for the last episode without missing any.

Kyoya meets another female classmate who worked in the area and he didn't even know that, first Airi is giving him a hard time about underwear, than it's about Minase's birthday, and then at the flower shop a classmate that he didn't know was there, but Minase had already talked to her, and Minase had only been there a few months while he had been there for years, thanks for the story, I'm looking forward to reaching the end of the 2nd chapter.

Minase is feeling guilty that she couldn't do for Airi what Kyoya did, she felt like a failure , she doesn't realize that mothers are not supposed to do everything by themselves, there is a reason for having a family, if it isn't a husband it could be a grandmother, aunt , sister, or neighbor that helps occasionally, she doesn't know that because Kyoya went through the loose of his father, he has an insight to Airi that Minase herself doesn't, Minase is jealous of Kyoya now, but if she was to rely on him more and let him know how she feels toward him, they will make a good team, Airi would like that and be better off for it, he has already proven that they work good together, thanks.

Kyoya shared a little of his past with Airi to help her with what she was going through so that she would know that she wasn't the only one to go through tough times,m and that he was there to help if she needed it. Minase admitted to herself hoe much she needed Airi to get through the days, When Airi and Minase reunited Airi broke out in tears and so did Minase, thanks for a good heart warming story, I'm looking forward to more, and especially how Minase and Kyoya will end up together,

Minase got off her conference call early, so the three of them went to enjoy the fireworks, everyone was happy and excited when the show started, Airi looked around at the kids and families, then she looked up at Minase and Kyoya next to her and thought how they looked like a family which led her to remember back about a year ago, when her parents disappeared, and what was said about her mother, and how Minase took her and protected her, and she blamed herself for Minase having to work, and than come home to take care of her with no time to play, she didn't realize that Minase enjoyed the responsibility of taking care of her, because she was a connection to Airi's mother, Minase's older sister, Airi hated being a burden to Minase, she thought that Minase needed a partner like Kyoya, she just didn't have time to look while taking care of Airi, her thoughts of the past, and her feelings of being a burden, and the slander of her mother by her relatives all came together in her head, so she tried running away from her emotions and than she ended up running away, when Minase and Kyoya noticed she was gone they started looking for her, she was nowhere to be found, thanks for the interesting story

Airi is cute and she doesn't want to be a burden on her Aya-chan, she wants Aya-chan to be happy, Airi feels like she is a burden on Aya-chan, and keeping her from having more fun, she doesn't know that Aya-chan is very happy to have Airi in her life, Kyoya doesn't want to commit to anything about Minase to Airi, he thinks Airi would be disappointed if nothing came of her actions to get Minase and Kyoya together, and he doesn't believe that Minase feels like he does, Airi likes Kyoya as a child to an adult, she would be happy with him as a parent, and she thinks Minase would be happy with him as a partner, even though she seems happy she misses her parents and would love to have Minase and Kyoya as replacement parents, thanks for the interesting and enjoyable story.

Minase and Kyoya had a date for the fireworks show, and Minase couldn't make it, so she said next year but it didn't happen, Kyoya remembered that and asked Airi if she would go with him, I wonder if Minase has the same memory, thanks.

Minase is very embarrassed not having on her underwear in front of Kyoya, Thanks.

What is Airi up to, or was it an accident, did she want to dry her hair. What will Minase do now. Thanks for your hard work, I'm enjoying this very much.

a convenient happening or a way to become closer. they were watching each other in high school, but not bold enough to pose the question, although she kept trying to get close to him by talking to him she couldn't get the right words or tone of voice, or give off the right attitude when she talked. Thanks for the interesting and enjoyable story.

Minase was wondering what Kyoya was up to with Airi, and what he was saying to her, Kyoya was worried that Airi being lost, but he was more worried about what the people around him thought about him talking to a little girl, Minase heard him say that he would tell Airi about her past, but she doesn't really want that known from someone else by Airi. thanks, the story is interesting.

Manise does remember you, she's hiding it, because she's not sure of your feelings.

Ayana is embarrassed after talking to Kyoya, especially after thinking him for worrying about her, she cares about him, they most have had a good talk the night he first met her, if he hadn't been so drunk on an empty stomach he might remember, was it an accident she ended up next door? Thanks, the story is interesting.

chatting across the balcony rail like long time nabors. thanks.

surprise after surprise, first wake up in an old schoolmates apartment, second the apartment is right next door to his, third she has a daughter old enough to have ben born at about the she got out of high school. thanks for the story, it's very interesting.

it's embarrassing waking up in a woman's house after the first meeting in 10 years, and having no memory of how you got there, or exactly where you are. thanks.

what a way to meet an old crush; being yelled at at work for something you had nothing to do with, having to sooth the client at cocktail meeting, and then going back to work to finish the reports, than end up vomiting in front of her. thanks it looks interesting.

I will try this and see if I like it

第1部完結お疲れ様でした！

主人公と共に水瀬さんの物語でもあって毎回更新を楽しみにしてました。

是非第2部にも戻ってくることを首を長くしてお待ちしてます！

第二部楽しみにしてます！

「第一部・完」で終わった作品の「第二部」が始まった例はほとんどないですよね。
（漫画作品でこういうのをいくつ見せられて来たことか。要は打ち切り）

第一部完結お疲れ様です。

楽しく読ませて頂きました。

こういった青春はとても微笑ましくみれますね。

주인공 한 대 때리고 싶네 ...

第一部完結お疲れ様でした

今後も構想があるとの事楽しみにしております
素敵な作品ありがとうございます

第一部完結おめでとうございます！
次からはお隣の二人に名前で呼んで貰えるのかな等と思いながら再開を待たせていただきます！

ご苦労様でした。更新を楽しみにしていました。

二人にもっと先まで進んで欲しかったです。次作が楽しみです。

ここまで来て付き合わなかったのはヘタレた感が凄いよな。

完結ありがとうございました
続きの構想もあるということで…
楽しみに待ってます‼️

完結おめでとうございます！
そして、お疲れ様でした！

カクコンのランキングに載っていたのを見て読み始めたのですが、圧巻でした。毎話ごとに「続きが早く読みたい！」と思うことができたので、最初から最後まで飽きることなく読み続けることが出来ました。「さすが」の一言に尽きます。

小説を書き始めて1ヶ月のひよっこである自分からしてみれば、篠宮さんの作品は1人の読者として楽しむことも出来ましたし、ひよっこ作者として学べることもたくさんありました。感謝しかありません！

次回作や、この作品の次部も楽しみにしていますので、これからも頑張ってください！

改めてお礼を申し上げます。

素晴らしい作品をありがとうございました！！！

P.S
ポケモン楽しいですよね。分かります。
自分もついついやってしまいますのでw

涙が止まらない。

堀越君、ここで、「自分は頼られて、迷惑だなんてこれっぽっちも思っていない。だって、高校の時からキミが好きだったから」と、言えれば、立派だったんだけどね。

ちゃんと見ててくれるんですね。子供だからこそ。この2人が幸せになる事を願わずにはいられないです。

子供ってのは、ちゃんと親を見てるもんだよ
そうか、あと2話なのか……

めっちゃいい作品だなぁと思ってたらあと2話!?びっくりしたけど楽しみにしてます！

努力が報われる事を願います…なんらかの形で

え、こんないいところで終わっちゃうんですか！？
アフターストーリーとかないんですか！？

今、彼女に気づかせてあげられるのは君しかいない
頑張れ

＞企業して

“事業を起こす”ので「起業」ですね。

こらアカン、頑張りが限界にきたな

途中から句読点が無くなっているのがまた……

過労とストレスによる鬱とか？

ここなんですけど…

意外ではあるが、彩奈は昔から交友関係が広いので色んな知識を持っていたりする。これもその知識の一つなのだろうけど……知らないわよ、そんな概念。なによ、それ。

彩奈ではなく、詩葉ではないでしょうか？

頼れる人が居なくなる心配。
自分の感情よりも愛莉ちゃんの幸せを優先するとお母さんの状況と重なりますがいかに。

身近な人続くねぇ。
2人の距離縮めるのはやっぱ愛莉ちゃんがキーなのかな？

어차피 의지 할거잖아, 마음껏 의지 하라고

頼りたいけど頼れない。がんばれ

>もう、君には頼れない、かな。
回収！！

그냥 평생 안만나는게 속편할 것 같은 두 사람

そうきたかー。
人の感情って難しいなー．

頑固だなぁ、迷惑かけたくないってのは分かるけどこのままだと愛莉ちゃんの方にも変な影響でかねないよ。

単にプライドが高いだけでしょ、この女の子。
小説の展開としては、こういうヒロインは読者の期待感から見ると面白みに欠けるけど、現実的にいるよね、こういう人。
自分のことをあからさまに好きだったら付き合ってあげてもいいよ、私も好意持ってるからってくる女性。

まあ、大概ヒロインに抜擢されない役回りなんだけど、作者も冒険するなあ。

どちらもヘタレだな。

正直高校教師をやりながら一人で子育ては無茶と言っても間違い無いレベルだよな。
部活顧問とかもいつまでも逃げられないしね。

美人もと同級生二人と美人後輩、後、幼女(笑)

おまわりさん、こいつです！！

あら、エッチ(笑)

こういう大人系ラブコメ大好物なので、楽しく読ませて頂いてます。

사이죠는 어른이 되었지만 어른스러워지진 못했네

고백 했었다는 사실은 지워버린건가

1週間…待ち遠しい…

どっちもヘタレと言うか大人に成ったせいで余計に臆病だわな。

同窓会でマウント取るなんて。成長しない男は魅力がないですね😞

同窓会は楽しいけど…マウントとる奴は嫌い(´Д｀)

彩奈さんかっけ〜😅

こんなクズ男がしゃしゃったりマウント合戦してる同窓会とかつまらんわww

行くっきゃないでしょ。

중고는 싫어!

浴衣を肩車？

誤字報告です。

>どうやら愛莉はスーパーに一人にいたわけではなく、

→　一人で
だろうと思います

芽を潰すために、自分に対する好意の有無を確かめる？？？？

自分を騙しちゃ、いけないよ。

景色がよい上層階の会議室で頭を下げつつ、散々怒鳴られ、最後には「今後とご贔屓に」と上司とともにお客さんを接待だ。

脱字ですかね？
「今後ともご贔屓に」

大変だと思いますが頑張って下さい！

面白いですね！
応援します！

修羅場(´Д｀)

続きが気になりすぎる！！！

面白い笑

水瀬さんも正直にならないと！w

他の方のコメントが理解できてない。
人間なんてそんなものでしょ？

なんか急に薄っぺらくなったな

時系列としては数日前の話なので、彩奈は詩葉の前では隙を見せたくなかったのと自分が母親になりきれてないことへの戒めからの言葉でしょうか。

彩奈の本心が分からない堀越くんにとって彩奈との関係は拗れてしまいそう。
引き続きのお話を楽しみにしてます。

Who is she trying to prove it to? How much is enough to prove it? If she sacrifices everything to meet her own standards of proof, will she really be satisfied?
Interesting story!

ありがちチョロインっぽいムーブになってるけど大丈夫か？

これはどうなん？？笑

最後の言葉で急に今まで描かれた人物がうすっぺらい、ただの女になるようなきがする。

うーむ……

一気にお話を最初から読ませていただきました！
とても読みやすく、また面白いです。
これからの展開も楽しみです。応援してます！！

s級美少女って表現気持ち悪く感じるわ

この感じだと両片思いだったのか…