The story, pacing, and dialogue is quite sporadic but the elements and characters would make for a …続きを読む
i really need POV to know from whose point of view the story is so hard to tell if i can't tell who…続きを読む
個人的には一話一話もうちょっとまとめて出してほしい。若干読みにくい。更新速度を上げる為だと思うからあんまり言うのもあれだけど
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