Wow, it's very interesting how the story is progressing. The Farsi dragon was a great detail, and the pose made me laugh. I imagined an anime scene. I give it an 8/10... Now for part 5.

This chapter was good, very interesting in how it describes the place, a bit cliché in some parts, but that doesn't bother me. Of the three I've read, I prefer the second one, so I'll give this one a 7/10 rating. I'll continue with the next one.

This chapter was more anime-like, I liked it, actually I liked it a little more than the previous chapter. You can see that it has great potential. I give it an 8/10. Now I'll read the next one.

Interesting chapter, I'm curious to see how it develops. Good start, I'll give it an 7.5 for now... Congratulations! 👏