Great piece of adventure work

Overall I'm very pleased with this work. There are some minor problems, but I can understand why it was set that way. I still have a lot to read and high motivation to do so.

Positives:
- easy to read
- character growth
- colorfull characters (including side ones)
- natural characters - they acts their age, not like some adult in childs body
- Way of living/acting maches world setting

Negatives:
- world economics
- game like infinite monster generator

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