第3話への応援コメント
The characters that are not perfect, cause perfecction gets bored easyly.
第7話への応援コメント
When i´m very bored or very angry with the cliché, and then i go with no breaks to a history. What you said is so necesary, you can´t write well if you don´t conect with the real world.
第1話への応援コメント
Totally agree! Mine it´s The Great Gig in the Sky from Pink Floyd.
編集済
第4話への応援コメント
Absolutly no! It´s more funny see how your characters are bleesing for mercy than make they lovely scenarios. That´s why i usually write horror or comedy.
XD
作者からの返信
thanks……!